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The Advanced Daydreams of Daisy

Rolling hills of buttercups align a picnic world
            A place where roses can be blue in gardens filled of pink
And where the eyes of strangers meet in gaze of tolerance
             A place beholding sympathy and empathy and love
Perhaps, a mere illusion, such a world could ever be
                       Yet, these are the advanced daydreams of Daisy

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Paulette Calasibetta Date: 11/1/2021 11:19:00 AM Hi Mike, Congratulations on your colorful display of the daydreams of daisy's. Blessings, Paulette Login to Reply Mike Gentile Date: 11/2/2021 4:34:00 AM Thank you so much Paulette !!

Jan Allison Date: 10/24/2021 11:35:00 AM we have to keep daydreaming its what keeps us alive Mike:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Mike Gentile Date: 10/25/2021 4:11:00 AM So true, Thanks Jan xxoo

Constance La France Date: 10/23/2021 6:09:00 AM Mike, a wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in Line's contest ~ peace and tranquility _Constance Login to Reply Mike Gentile Date: 10/23/2021 7:59:00 AM Thank you so much Constance!!!

Francis J Grasso Date: 10/23/2021 3:40:00 AM Well done, Mike! Congratulations! ...Fran Login to Reply Mike Gentile Date: 10/23/2021 5:25:00 AM Thanks so much Francis!!

Susan Ashley Date: 10/22/2021 7:59:00 PM Dear Mike, I adore these daisy daydreams, and I wish it could be so. Your compassionate heart shines with creative beauty and love. Simply splendid! Congratulations for your win in Line's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply Mike Gentile Date: 10/23/2021 5:24:00 AM Thank you so much Susan, so kind of you to comment xxoo

Sam Kauffman Date: 10/22/2021 10:16:00 AM Very interesting poem Mike. Very creative. Very original. Congratulations on your win! Sending you the blessings of blue roses! Login to Reply Mike Gentile Date: 10/22/2021 5:19:00 PM Thanks so much Sam!!

Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/22/2021 8:49:00 AM Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. Sounds like a wonderful/colorful place. Have a blessed autumn day...................................... Login to Reply Mike Gentile Date: 10/22/2021 9:47:00 AM Thanks so much Paula for your kind words !!

Beata Agustin Date: 10/21/2021 11:49:00 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me bask in imagination-freedom while anticipating for its reality through the working of the Lord I believe in. God bless you. Login to Reply Mike Gentile Date: 10/22/2021 3:47:00 AM Thank you Beata!!

Christuraj Alex Date: 10/21/2021 11:06:00 PM A beautifully poetic work. The Advanced Daydreams Of Daisy is unique. Congratulations! Login to Reply Mike Gentile Date: 10/22/2021 3:46:00 AM Thank you so much Christuraj!!

Tom Cunningham Date: 10/11/2021 1:28:00 PM The sort of place we all daydream about Mike and if everyone put their heart and soul into it we could make it a reality. Tom Login to Reply Mike Gentile Date: 10/11/2021 2:25:00 PM I agree Tom, I’m ready!!

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/11/2021 12:21:00 PM The world you describe sounds like a place to be, Mike--illusion or not I like the advanced daydreams of Daisy. Login to Reply Mike Gentile Date: 10/11/2021 2:25:00 PM Thank you Vijay!!

Heidi Sands Date: 10/11/2021 12:19:00 PM Beautiful poem that shows your caring heart Mike. So pleasant to read today. A fave for me :) Login to Reply Mike Gentile Date: 10/11/2021 2:24:00 PM Thanks so much Heidi!!

L Milton Hankins Date: 10/11/2021 11:29:00 AM Okay, so call me Pollyannish or accuse me of looking through rose-colored glasses, but I believe, if the world would simply wake up, such a world could definitely be. But, you understand, I'm not holding my breath! Great writing, thought-provoking, enjoyable. I loved it. Login to Reply Mike Gentile Date: 10/11/2021 2:24:00 PM Thanks Milton, I wish it could be so too!!