The Abyss King

The proud ruler known vainly as Saklas
In the abyss proudly proclaimed with brass:
“I am god, no other but me!”
Then a voice above said in glee:
“You are completely wrong Saklas, you ass.”



Date: 09/06/2022
I counted the syllables myself
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Roper Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 12:03 PM
Congratulations on your win in Tania’s contest, David, great limerick. Enjoy your day & God bless
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 7:55 PM
SO funny. Love this one
Chamberlain Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 12:45 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement.
Kitchin Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 7:04 AM
David, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative limerick!
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