The Abandoned Upland

Across the limpid and serene river, the oasis of the Wild West pioneers,
there are ivory and charcoal peaks waiting for mountaineers
to discover as they rest under the long-leafed pines that sway;
on this side, the saw-tooth oaks and the daisy bushes are lovely greeters.



Not long ago, this abandoned upland was the home of gold-diggers,
sarcasm and violence went hand in hand...even eagles could have lost their feathers,
and those cluttered wooden shacks weren't not built for comfort,
but with limited space, they could hardly stretch out their legs and sleep like bears.



Travelers are very fascinated by the peace and scenery, not seen from their urban lair;
come to enjoy a short period of tranquility and breathe in the crisp air:
some write, some paint...others dream away to visualize that great era!
Look past that river, willow oaks and maples can soothe the travels of a trudging bear. 



Find your spot, whenever you choose and be vowed by an imagination so rare;
take off your fedora hat and go beyond those mountains brightened by the sun's glare,
let a mockingbird or shrike delight your senses with their beautiful song...
with a fervid wish, let them take you where they have watched the new moon's mare.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 4/27/2011 4:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this fine contest...Sara
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Date: 4/27/2011 10:45:00 AM
Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest, Andrew
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Date: 4/27/2011 8:45:00 AM
Great to see your success in the top ten with this great poem Andrew. Congratulations on your special entry's grace. "new moon's mare".. This was a great idea Andrew. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/26/2011 4:14:00 PM
You took us on a journey in history from the frantic days of gold-diggers to the serenity found at this beautiful site today, Andrea. You know I'm a fan and I am so happy to see you in the winners' circle. Congratulations, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations Andrew on your win in the John Moses Freeman's contest "Rubaiyat". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:39:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your amazing win in John's contest with this perfect poem using the new form so well my friend.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv..
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:28:00 PM
Many congratulations on your seventh place win Andrew with this lovely poetry (((( applause )))) well done.....:) smiles
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations on 7th place win with this beauty. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Caryl
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