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"Can you feel the soul of an abandoned house; can you hear the whispering?" Quote by _Constance La France I hear the whispers from those chimes still swinging on the splintered porch; where windows, once in happy times, shone brightly neath the lantern's torch. Abandoned now, the old house moans as wind chimes strike with sadness too. I feel the heartbreak in the tones that echo loss of what it knew. The gloom and emptiness impart that signs of living are now gone; the gatherings within its heart now missed where coziness was drawn. The wind chimes whisper in the breeze; lament the loss of happy days. As sadness murmurs through the trees- forlorn, bereft- the house decays. May 27, 2023 Writing Challenge - C Quotes - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Quote Chosen: No. 3

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Date: 6/8/2023 2:57:00 PM
Sad for the abandoned memories and love now fled. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 6/7/2023 5:32:00 PM
So sad, Sandra, especially your last line. Beautifully sad. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/6/2023 3:57:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara
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Date: 6/3/2023 7:02:00 PM
Sandra, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations and well done !
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