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The Unveiled Flaw

It started when I had no shape, At home or school no place to escape. People judged me and mocked my fate. It was so terrible, Yes!! I was overwieght. Concealed myself behind that door, Trapped by the walls that helped me ignore. Thinking of ways to aid me and raise, Resolve ,restrict to impose me a praise. One night I decided to just rearrange, By climbing the stairs and plates exchanged. All my time and efforts it took, Hoping to see my new good look. And when I stepped one day on the scale , I stared at it from glowy pink to yellow pale. I pulled myself together very soon, I threw what i acquired that smaller spoon. Now I knew what I realy needed indeed, That confidence and glare and upright feet. The belly fat is not what i gotta get rid of, But the notions of people were just to be tossed off!

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Date: 3/17/2023 1:12:00 AM
I like your unique style
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Date: 2/18/2023 6:26:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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