The Artist

Tired of summer's lust-- His brush chose the warmest hues Painting the harvest Fall. ....for the seasons contest.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 6/28/2010 11:00:00 PM

Dear Barbara, Congratulations on YOUR Well Dserved Win Superb Write YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/21/2010 6:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Barbara. Love, Carol

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 6/20/2010 9:47:00 PM

Great write, Barbara...I like the idea of Summer being a lustful composition for the artist who now is painting Fall. Congrats on your win! Dan C

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2010 5:17:00 PM

oh,nice how it fell into FALL. Congratulations!

Michael Benkhen

Date: 6/19/2010 4:48:00 PM

That's really nice...

Date: 6/19/2010 1:46:00 PM

Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/16/2010 9:12:00 PM

Congrats BG on your success in my contest with this wonderful write.. and also appreciate your supporting my contests ..with luv.. Linda-Marie.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/16/2010 6:33:00 AM

Excellent work that should be in the winner's circle..I am awed by the excellence of it..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Rick Parise

Date: 6/15/2010 9:38:00 PM

I love this poem ~ absolutley beautiful ~#1 in my book~You watch and see!!!~Rick

Rick Parise

Date: 6/15/2010 9:36:00 PM

Thank you barbara , I was just outside as a nice breeze brought the trees to a hopeful sway , a pink sunset with a few fluffy white clouds are still visible in the west salem hills heading out tward the coast. Roses and Irises are poping up all over the place, a beautiful picture.Are you ever coming home (LOL) I am a catering chef for Roth market fresh grocer in w.Salem , Im also a non-practicing Phlebotomist/lab tech ~a little info for you~Have a blessed night ~Rick