The Homeless - the Footle Style

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~ The Homeless ~ ( Footle Suite ) No home For some No food No good Sleep street No treat That's bad So sad If can Help man Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2016 August.09. 2017 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain ~ Author's Notes: The ' Footle ' is a poetry form or style that was inspired by the famous FLEAS Adam.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/9/2017 11:50:00 PM

You shined a beautiful light on a sad message. Well done.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 8/12/2017 7:11:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Susan, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Footle, " The Homeless" poem.Deeply appreciate it all!You're most kind!:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:))D

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/9/2017 11:27:00 PM

A well-penned footle with an important message.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 8/12/2017 7:10:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly M. L, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Footle, " The Homeless" poem.Deeply appreciate it all!You're very kind!:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:))D