The 100 Year War

The 100 Year War

I rise
Mighty and strong
Armor plated and ready for battle
I shall behead the infidel
I shall conquer the evil doers
I am a warrior
Both great and bad

I am a warrior, and
I am sad
Tears fall upon my sword 
I know not why
This great warrior why do I cry?

I can battle an army and rise the victor
Yet I can not rise out of me bed
I am sad and lethargic
I am weak in the knee
I am depressed
To much sadness in me

Lovers a plenty
Conquered lands and treasures
I have it all
Yet the sadness invades
The depths of me soul

I give my heart to all that I love
I feed the poor
From the spoils of my wars
Yet here I am, I think a kind soul
Burdened in darkness
Depression is my hole

My love I know this seems bizarre
You have all you wish, a rising star
A Black Knight with honors flying high
To you I say forgive me please
For battles you never shall see

I lie down
In our garden of roses
Thorns to make me feel more than I do
For the darkness robs us both
For me to feel you

Good by my love

Notes: Anyone for has suffered depression, knows that a 100 year war is nothing  compared to battling depression.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/11/2014 12:25:00 AM
Such truth! It is very much like preparing for battle..with yourself. Fantastic write.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/11/2014 1:36:00 AM
Thank you so much A.E. Rivenbark!
Date: 12/9/2014 7:23:00 PM
Arthur, sad but sweet. It seems very determined. I love it! Meg
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Meg Anderson
Date: 12/9/2014 9:57:00 PM
Yes well it speaks volumes. Great work.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/9/2014 9:45:00 PM
I love that you love it! Thank you!
Date: 12/9/2014 12:42:00 AM
I feel very sad of the result of the century.Thanks for sharing dear poet Vaso.Regards. -Safa
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/9/2014 9:44:00 PM
Thank you Safa, much appreciated.
Date: 12/8/2014 10:46:00 PM
Arthur, emotions run very strong in this write, good penned. Blessings to you
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/9/2014 9:44:00 PM
Thank you Eve :)
Date: 12/8/2014 7:11:00 AM
Wow that's expressive n impressive Arthur! Great work if I cud give more than a seven!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/9/2014 9:43:00 PM
You are so so so kind, thank you, :)
Date: 12/8/2014 2:36:00 AM
Wow! I am very impressed Arthur! This is very beautiful! I can almost feel the pain and internal struggles and suffering of your very brave warrior! I really love it! A solid 7 for you my dear friend! Have a very nice day! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/9/2014 9:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Dorian :) hugs
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