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The-Were-Never-There

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"The-Were-Never-There" Corrections serve their superiority a place of ere sucked out by the vacuum of those in need of love messages buried remain watching far removed, undone the possessive pronouns cursed the unpossessed Corrections serve their superiority until they drop their keys and through the cracks of steel they see the incarcerated reaching walking on air like they aren’t there; were never there (LadyLabyrinth / 2022) A Halloween Story “Walking on Air” / Soundpool https://youtu.be/NGLbGCKX14Q "Under Giant Trees" / Agnes Obel https://youtu.be/FOK3iWJ_mHk "Chord Left" / Agnes Obel https://youtu.be/3DM8YwiGeyE LYRICS/"Walking on Air", Soundpool https://soundpool.bandcamp.com/track/walking-on-air

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I Am Anaya

Date: 10/8/2022 6:11:00 PM

A ghostly purgatory, best for a Halloween story! It chilled me down to the bone marrow, LL. --Off-Indigo

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/8/2022 6:31:00 PM

yeah, it's one of those stories that leaves you frozen waiting for the permafrost to thaw out. It fits Halloween perfectly. The Handmaid's tale is a perfect fit. Xx, Of-LoveJoyB

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/8/2022 6:30:00 PM

https://www.thrivetalk.com/indigo-adults/

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/8/2022 6:30:00 PM

for those, who are not aware of "Indigo", as I am certain, being one, you are already aware.