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That's What Sucks

In the static snarling evening traffic, when in jam I get perennially stuck, my tense senses get so very sick, that’s what sucks. When I bear with people I don’t like, I feel I’m stuck in a marsh of muck, a compromise chord I need to strike, that’s what sucks. When a friend borrows money from me, doesn’t come back to return even a buck, for he disappears, his face I don’t see, that’s what sucks. When your blooming garden I pass by, but for you a rose I can’t pluck, reason you don’t tell, I don’t know why, that’s what sucks. I try to reach and win your heart, it drifts away, I run out of my luck, love is lost, I can’t make a fresh start, that’s what sucks. August 12, 2020 Contest : It Sucks Sponsor : Kai Michael Nreumann

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Date: 8/12/2020 4:42:00 AM
Hold the phones! This is sharp, snappy, has a point or three to get across. Very cool. Definite winner.
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Book: Shattered Sighs