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Too late for the contest What Makes Me Smile
From a reddish, horrifying gloomy cloud which brings upon a frowning beast~ I shall overcome and finally a smile shall bring me peace—poet :) Smiles are weapons against pain Armor protection for depression or hate Diffusers for an opponent’s attack Antidotes of dopamine and cortisol Smiling eyes are the windows to the soul some say, yet smiles can be deceiving A player uses his charm that sweeps you away An enemies leer stirs unspoken innuendos, mouth is smiling yet dead eyes defy A ghoulish grin denies it's upside-down smile, scornful cinnabar smears, spanning ‘cross the lips from cheek-to-cheek as fingers paint when tears deny a petulant pout ‘Tis what makes me frown What makes me smile can be admired in; Arts colorful paintings, ancient and new Fashion Design, Egyptian hieroglyphics Poetry, witty with a bit of whimsy humorous Limericks with mindful tricks Animals and a child's innocence a baby’s giggle, a kitten’s purr, a puppy’s warmth, a bird’s chirp Musicals songs, Movies Rom-coms Theatre recites, the Opera excites Dances that mash up with Western music, high energy fusion of styles global, multifaceted technique Bolly-Hop, Disco-Funk, Tap! Is sheik Music's nostalgia, classical is golden Nature's moonshine, sunshine, a stolen starry night Red bourbon rosette, blue violet, fragrance flowers From land to Ocean, to the crystalline sapphire sea Food and drink, Antipasto, mint Iced Tea, Tapas and Sangria, Hors d’oeuvres and cognac Finally and most of all what makes me smile? Love of life, so free-spirited, it gives love back

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Date: 5/21/2025 9:26:00 AM
What an awesome entry, dear Anaya! Sad you couldn't post it on time. Some contests get filled fast. You have beautifully analysed the type of smiles, true, sincere, deceitful, sly and fake and also enlisted the things that make you smile- from pets, to flowers and all beautiful objects that bring joy to most of the people. Your poem has indeed made me smile
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Date: 5/21/2025 11:16:00 AM
Ty, Valsita! <--endearing in Spanish ,) Yes! it was necessary for me to warm up before I got to the goods. So much to smile about, like you my dear poet friend ~
Date: 5/19/2025 12:28:00 PM
Creative lines too bad it was too late for the contest. Maybe another will open up in which it will fit. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Date: 5/20/2025 3:02:00 PM
Ah, that's quite alright, it's still a pleasure to share, Sara. Ty! Xhugs
Date: 5/19/2025 9:23:00 AM
Dearest Anaya, a dazzling art and so full of wisdom, color, and life! I love how you explore the many layers of a smile and its power, its masks, its truth. Your joyful list of what brings you happiness is infectious, from art and music to the innocence of animals and children. How could I not love your radiant, free-spirited love of life. Your words truly make me smile! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 5/19/2025 9:47:00 AM
Many emotions maybe stirring behind a smile or roiling. There is too much to mention of what makes us smile, don't you agree, life has so much to offer us, nature is free, everything else are blessings, like your infectious reviews and comments, Daniel ~ TYVM xhugs
Date: 5/18/2025 9:36:00 PM
This is awesome Anaya! I would have had an even harder time judging as many were great! I love how you’ve listed all the things that make you smile! Sorry you didn’t get to enter! I was shocked it got filled up so fast! Have a great week and keep writing beautifully!
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Date: 5/18/2025 9:46:00 PM
Oh hi Karen, thank you. I didn't make it, but it's so nice you came to visit anyway...yes it went quickly. So, I changed the title making it a statement, and not a question, I then expanded on a few lines and got carried away. Lol. Til next time! Goodnight sweet Karen~
Date: 5/18/2025 5:04:00 PM
beautiful and sensitive poetry, "i mean you really love life" have a sweet day
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Date: 5/18/2025 5:28:00 PM
Poetry is an opportunity to express how and what we love or hate about life, Yann. Tyvm
Date: 5/18/2025 3:45:00 PM
Beautiful!! Too bad it was too late for the contest. Would have done well-
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Date: 5/18/2025 3:48:00 PM
Tyvm, Paige. Do you think so--it may have Karen Jones is one of the sweetest poetess's and gives everyone a chance to shine (generously places). You are very kind to me, ill be there soon~

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