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That Special Someone

I could gaze in your eyes like a hypnotic daze, as clear as the sky on a summers hot day. And when you smile my heart begins to melt, it's the greatest feeling i have ever felt. To say I Love You isn't a lie, being without you i would break down & cry. Girl your my everything from head to toe, for us to be together is all i know. If i could just show you what you mean to me, you'd know that me + you were destined to be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/15/2022 1:33:00 AM
Lovely poem
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Date: 1/25/2016 7:05:00 PM
JAMIE, Excellent written poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
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Date: 11/30/2010 10:36:00 AM
lovely words
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Date: 11/29/2010 6:41:00 AM
A well deserved featured poem you have here Jamie. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/25/2010 9:20:00 AM
Good little ditty! Nice use of rhyme. You are primed and ready for a scintillating, love tour! Have a romantic day!
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Date: 11/23/2010 4:56:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with its creative theme.. hope your time on the Soup is special and fun..check out the contests offered to members.. good luck with luv.. and a Happy Thanksgiving...
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Date: 11/22/2010 1:22:00 PM
You have penned passionate thoughts on the feelings of love, Jamie
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Date: 11/22/2010 11:06:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jamie. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2010 7:56:00 AM
thank you i am glad you appreciate it Jen. It is my first ever bit or poetry and i wasn't sure what reaction i would get
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Date: 11/22/2010 7:54:00 AM
I love this! It's sweet and romantic, and let's your intention be clear. Thanks for brightening my day with this great poetry! ~Jen~
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