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That Smile On Her Face

A smile on her face and a gleam in her eye*, As she kisses him on lips and adjusts his tie, A day long wait to surprise him at the door, joy of motherhood can’t be contained anymore! His joy shot up on the barometric scale, He dropped the brief case as words fail, He held her in his arms, delight on his face, Filled her with kisses she could use for days! Two years to marriage and setting up home, Pink love and kisses wherever they roam, Delights of food, flavoured with her passion, flowers and chocolates are a daily occasion! Young couple in love like a garden of roses, perfume of pleasure in unceasing doses, But here was their moment to crown it all, She would be a mother before next fall. A woman varies her smile for different reasons, Like nature varies it’s flora with the seasons, Red rosy smile is an invitation to romance, wry smile, a rejection of amorous advance. How about that smile that says ‘it’s okay’? your wise eye tells you, she means ‘no way!’ the smile that colours her face at wedding bells. is one that reappears when her tummy swells! It was that smile that she greeted him with, It had love, passion, gratitude and full width, the smile on her face and gleam in her eye, was graduation to motherhood of a girl once shy! Written 10 April 2020 Placed second in the contest * acknowledge Eve Roper for this beautiful sentence from her poem on which the contest is based. Sponsor Silent one

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Date: 1/18/2021 7:37:00 AM
A beautiful heartfelt poem, Krish. So much passion and feelings - mother and baby both are so lucky! Best wishes ~ Mala
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/18/2021 11:05:00 AM
Thanks Malabika! So pleased you like this one. Motherhood, early days of marriage and all that comes with it! Best wishes
Date: 4/13/2020 6:51:00 PM
wonderful flow in this beautiful poem Krish, congratulations on your win... hugs and blessings
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/14/2020 12:03:00 AM
Hugs from me Sandra! Thanks.
Date: 4/13/2020 5:26:00 PM
Krish, a lovely way to weave, "A smile on her face and a gleam in her eye". A couple madly in love to a newborn; just wonderful Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/14/2020 12:04:00 AM
Thank you Eve. First love, marriage and first baby are amongst the most beautiful experiences of life!
Date: 4/13/2020 4:22:00 PM
Very romantic and passionate write Krish---enjoyed the soft loving tone that gives a natural rhythm to your poem. Congrats on your superb win.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/13/2020 5:14:00 PM
Thanks Vijay. Thanks for a lovely feedback. Much appreciated!
Date: 4/13/2020 7:15:00 AM
Great story telling Krish.. Congrats on your placement in the contest..
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/13/2020 8:25:00 AM
Thank you So, for hosting this interesting contest! To do justice I had to try and match Eve in her brilliant composition. Loved the other poems that this contest has generated! Great work!

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