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That Slow Green Burn

Fire at the edge of the world.
Eyes deep within the shoreless forest sea,
Witnesses of most ancient ways
Watch smoke rising from the approaching front
Of treeless, naked land
Stripped bare by blind ambition,
Quietly await the end.

Five thousand acres a day
The last great garden drifts into the skies
To join the circling storms that once nourished it.

The fires lick and crawl their way
Into its green heart.

Fire is eating the soul of the world
Reducing the face of its childhood to ash;
- Behold here the sorrow of Eden's last relic
Becoming the charnel-house of Creation.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Mckenzie Avatar
February 28, 2009 at 6:49 AM
Congratulations on a outstanding poem of the week! Laura :)
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February 27, 2009 at 6:44 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Bill. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
February 25, 2009 at 12:56 PM
I just introduced myself to your poetry and have enjoyed reading your work. Cograts on being featured this week. -Jason
Jordan Avatar
February 25, 2009 at 8:49 AM
William congrats on having your poetry featured this week - God Bless, MJ
Ehigiator Avatar
February 25, 2009 at 8:40 AM
Much to think about here, Very interesting piece..Thoughtfully expressed and well penned.Congratulations on having your poetry being featured this week.God Bless *Tyesha
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February 24, 2009 at 9:12 AM
Congratulations William on "That Slow Green Burn" being featured this week. Vince
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February 23, 2009 at 3:53 PM
Much for the reader to think about in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured! I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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