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That Silent Storm, No Mortal Man Can Stop

That Silent Storm, No Mortal Man Can Stop Like a great storm crushing out a desperate sigh such is unstoppable force when death draws nigh. In myriad forms that dark angel tramps this world oblivious to sad pleas mankind may hurl. Death slays even the strong young or very weak old stopped not by vows, gems or great hordes of King's gold. That great sickle cuts anything known to mankind no hiding place can mortal man ever find. When that dearest life has flown by, old and quite gray expect a visit night or sunny bright day. Death cares not man nor beauty of songbirds on wing seeking naught but final death of everything. In your human soul, hold dear this treasure of life. For this world is dark-old and full of deadly strife. Robert J. Lindley, 10-26-2016 ( New Form- Sonnet Lin 12/11) Rhyme AA, BB, CC, DD, EE, FF, GG Each stanza verses must be exact syllable count of 12,11, 12,11 Final couplet must be syllable count of 12 on 12... Total word count 120 to 128 Poem Syllable Counter Results Syllables Per Line: 12 11 12 11 0 12 11 12 11 0 12 11 12 11 0 12 12 Total # Syllables: 162 Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: N/A Total # Words: 126 Note- Inspired this week by the death of a friend that occurred last Friday. Such a gentle sweet soul she was and always jolly and sincere when we met. She shall be deeply missed by all of us...

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Date: 10/26/2016 3:56:00 PM
Thank you my friend, always a pleasure to read your kind comments. YES, THE NEW SONNET FORM IS A BIT OF A CHALLENGE, AS WAS OUR COLLABORATION POEM THAT AQUA MARINE posted today using ANOTHER NEW FORM, Sonnet Lin 678..
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Date: 10/26/2016 2:02:00 PM
Death is but a door that opens into the afterlife. And if I think of my loved ones going through that door it gives me comfort knowing they are living on. I am sorry about your loss Robert. I like the challenge of your new form. You did a great job on this poem to use as an example. Blessings, Connie ; ) 7
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