That poem alone pleases

That man alone seems charming,
Who a fancied lass finds fascinating, 
That poem is a piece of art
That captivates a reader’s heart. 
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Translation |12.01.2025| man, woman, poem
 
Poet’s note: Sanskrit has thousands of verses of wisdom called Subhashhitam. Which man can be called truly charming? As per this shloka, he who’s found attractive to a woman, to whom a woman is drawn. Okay, what type of poem abducts a reader’s heart? That which is found interesting to a reader who knows poetry; forget all the critics. The transliteration of the Sanskrit verse follows:

Ramanieeya sah hi purushhah, 
ramanee yatra eva rajyate vidagdhaa |
Shlokah sah eva su-bhagah-chittam,
saktam hee yatra rasikasya || 217 ||
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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