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That Old Willow Tree

Beneath that old willow tree let me lie, Many life secrets it is securely keeping Of years long before I thought to die The old willow tree was often weeping. When as a young child, I lay sad beneath, When my true love lay cradled sleeping, When I came home much, much too high, Or feared the worst, oh, I am creeping Beneath that old willow tree, let me lie Then, I shall feel at home...when I die. Written July 7, 2021 For "The Last Dance" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Craig Cornish

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Date: 7/8/2021 5:24:00 PM
Wonderful. Love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/8/2021 8:14:00 PM
Thanks, Gina. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 7/8/2021 12:08:00 PM
I have fond memories of a particular willow. It over hung an ornamental lake that a mate and I would surreptitiously fish. Try as we might, it was impossible to get a bait under its trailing branches to where the carp dwelt. I can think of worse last resting places... particularly as that lake, and hence, that willow, was in a cemetery. Smashing write, Milt, Terry
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/8/2021 1:29:00 PM
Thanks so much, Terry, for your comments. I am so happy my poem brought a fond memory to mind.
Date: 7/7/2021 3:16:00 PM
There is much beauty to behold in sadness and I can feel it in this poem of yours. Great poem, Milt!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/7/2021 3:56:00 PM
Thanks so much, Justin. I really appreciate when you read my poems and comment. It means a lot to me.
Date: 7/7/2021 12:22:00 PM
so melancholy and also so beautiful and smooth flowing this is. Love it, Milt.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/7/2021 12:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. I really appreciate your kind compliment, and I am so happy that you enjoyed my poem. I'm in a melancholy mood today, for July 7th is/was Deborah's birthday.

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