That Old Willow Tree

Beneath that old willow tree let me lie,
Many life secrets it is securely keeping
Of years long before I thought to die
The old willow tree was often weeping.
When as a young child, I lay sad beneath,
When my true love lay cradled sleeping,
When I came home much, much too high,
Or feared the worst, oh, I am creeping
Beneath that old willow tree, let me lie
Then, I shall feel at home...when I die.


Written July 7, 2021
For "The Last Dance" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Craig Cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 7/8/2021 5:24:00 PM
Wonderful. Love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/8/2021 8:14:00 PM
Thanks, Gina. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 7/8/2021 12:08:00 PM
I have fond memories of a particular willow. It over hung an ornamental lake that a mate and I would surreptitiously fish. Try as we might, it was impossible to get a bait under its trailing branches to where the carp dwelt. I can think of worse last resting places... particularly as that lake, and hence, that willow, was in a cemetery. Smashing write, Milt, Terry
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/8/2021 1:29:00 PM
Thanks so much, Terry, for your comments. I am so happy my poem brought a fond memory to mind.
Date: 7/7/2021 12:22:00 PM
so melancholy and also so beautiful and smooth flowing this is. Love it, Milt.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/7/2021 12:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. I really appreciate your kind compliment, and I am so happy that you enjoyed my poem. I'm in a melancholy mood today, for July 7th is/was Deborah's birthday.
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