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That Night

"Live life to fullest, as it seems-
      but, leave unlocked your door of dreams."
                                                            _by Poet

Three decades had elapsed- surpassing days
they lived next door- partaking fun-filled years.
Oft-times, I'd sit, so dreamlike in a daze-
still fancying them here- and, oft with tears.

One night, I closed my eyes to simply rest
beside the moonlit pool in our backyard.
Before long, deep asleep- I felt distressed
by hazy lights fast catching me off guard.

Then, through the circle of large maple trees,
two shadowy beings each waved a hand-
ethereal- there, floating with the breeze,
they called my name- so I would understand.

My trancelike state of mind said, no! Unreal!
Imaginary, this must surely be!
The spirits of my mom and dad, surreal-
now gliding 'cross the lawn to visit me.

It was that night, I closed my eyes to rest-
while through the circle of large maple trees,
my prayers had sent that vision- truly blessed;
dreamed of my parents- waving in the breeze.


May 24, 2021

~1st Place~
Contest: Writing Prompt - Dreamlike
Sponsor: Constance La France
Judged: 06/02/2021

   Words Required (in italics)
   dreamlike, hazy, shadowy, ethereal, 
   trancelike, unreal, imaginary, surreal
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Roper Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 8:05 AM
Sandra, great story and imagery. Sure have missed your visits .Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed reading. My warmest wishes. God bless you. <3
La France Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 3:10 PM
Sandra, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge, and I like you image and quote too, love - Constance
Alex Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 12:03 PM
Wonderful. Congratulations!
Hankins Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 6:33 PM
Beautiful writing--rhyme and rhythm. You have incorporated the required words so skillfully. I really enjoyed your poem, Sandra.
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