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"Live life to fullest, as it seems- but, leave unlocked your door of dreams." _by Poet Three decades had elapsed- surpassing days they lived next door- partaking fun-filled years. Oft-times, I'd sit, so dreamlike in a daze- still fancying them here- and, oft with tears. One night, I closed my eyes to simply rest beside the moonlit pool in our backyard. Before long, deep asleep- I felt distressed by hazy lights fast catching me off guard. Then, through the circle of large maple trees, two shadowy beings each waved a hand- ethereal- there, floating with the breeze, they called my name- so I would understand. My trancelike state of mind said, no! Unreal! Imaginary, this must surely be! The spirits of my mom and dad, surreal- now gliding 'cross the lawn to visit me. It was that night, I closed my eyes to rest- while through the circle of large maple trees, my prayers had sent that vision- truly blessed; dreamed of my parents- waving in the breeze. May 24, 2021 ~1st Place~ Contest: Writing Prompt - Dreamlike Sponsor: Constance La France Judged: 06/02/2021 Words Required (in italics) dreamlike, hazy, shadowy, ethereal, trancelike, unreal, imaginary, surreal

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Date: 6/3/2021 8:05:00 AM
Sandra, great story and imagery. Sure have missed your visits .Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed reading. My warmest wishes. God bless you. <3
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Date: 6/2/2021 3:10:00 PM
Sandra, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge, and I like you image and quote too, love - Constance
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:03:00 PM
Wonderful. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/24/2021 6:33:00 PM
Beautiful writing--rhyme and rhythm. You have incorporated the required words so skillfully. I really enjoyed your poem, Sandra.
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