That Instant

that instant never again to pass this way posted on September 21, 2019

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 9/23/2019 12:55:00 PM

Sometimes good sometimes bad

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/23/2019 6:32:00 PM

SO true - sometimes a blessing.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/22/2019 4:45:00 AM

Clever, Line; hope you were carrying a camera! Another moment in time...and pooooof!! Regards // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/22/2019 12:04:00 PM

We've go to find a way to slow down time.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2019 7:27:00 PM

so much felt in so few words written

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/21/2019 7:36:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 9/21/2019 6:57:00 PM

Line, This is a brilliant poem. This wayward instant just might stay around. -Richard

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/21/2019 7:02:00 PM

Thanks, Richard. LOL

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/21/2019 2:14:00 PM

surely...once it passes it's forever gone... no truer words spoken....good one my friend :) hugs

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/21/2019 7:01:00 PM

Not to be taken for granted. Thanks, Sandra.