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That Fleeting Moment

That fleeting moment that did attack In time we cannot get back Me and you against the time Ever more to be lost in the wind like a chime Date Written: 5/25/2021 Note: Acrostic Rhyme Time Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Frederic Parker

Date: 5/29/2021 9:39:00 AM

Always in the moment as they pass so quickly

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/1/2021 8:52:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this one. Time does go by so quickly. Have a blessed day..................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/29/2021 6:09:00 AM

Succinct and to the point, Paula:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/29/2021 9:19:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this one on Time. Have a blessed day..................

Alkas Poetry

Date: 5/28/2021 6:15:00 AM

time lost, time passed, THINGS left behind,,,important matter time... good poem dear salute alkas

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/28/2021 3:24:00 PM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this write about Time. Where does all the time go???? Have a blessed day/weekend..................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/27/2021 2:50:00 AM

Short and sweet.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2021 12:15:00 PM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day..................

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 5/26/2021 1:22:00 PM

Moments are indeed fleeting Paula, such a nice acrostic on this important subject, Blessings, Gordon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2021 12:14:00 PM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like my time acrostic write. Have a blessed day..................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/26/2021 10:23:00 AM

How precious Time is , especially when we begin to realize we cannot get it back, only live in the memory of it. Thank you for sharing, gl in the contest dear friend xo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/26/2021 11:12:00 AM

Thanks for writing and for your good luck. Glad you like this one. Yes, time sure does go by fast. Today is all we have. Have a blessed day..................

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/26/2021 8:52:00 AM

Good one. God bless you. Love, Gina

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/26/2021 11:10:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this Time write. Have a blessed day..................

Judy Ball

Date: 5/25/2021 9:11:00 PM

So true my dear. Time is so fleeting. We are only guaranteed NOW so we better make sure brain is in gear before putting self in motion. Good job. God Bless, JB

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/26/2021 11:08:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you love this one. Yes, "We are only guaranteed NOW." Today is all one has. Have a blessed day..................

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/25/2021 2:56:00 PM

Very true, Paula - Time is fleeting. Love the beautiful acrostic. BW ~ Mala

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/26/2021 11:06:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you love this acrostic write. It was fun to write. Have a blessed day..................

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/25/2021 1:52:00 PM

Life is short--every moment counts. All the best, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/26/2021 11:05:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this write about "That Fleeting Moment." Have a blessed day..................