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That very first, velvet, warm meeting with him!, Goosebumps, danced, all over your young skin. His eyes, say “come hither “,with a welcoming twinkle. How to say, “no” to his soft, dazzling dimples? You were his, then, now, and a starlit forevermore! Sealed,like a beautiful butterfly, his surrendering paramour. 1/13/2024

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Date: 1/15/2024 7:46:00 PM
You sure were/are one precocious Panagiota! ~ Pimples and Zits
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Date: 1/15/2024 8:45:00 PM
G~ you are a riot!….. I think were/ are are 100% qiute accurate. Although being “The Ancient Mariner,” so to speaki heve no skin problems, in fact, am very old…yet peopleb stop me in the stores and ask me what I use on my face, they tell me. It is young and glowing?i dont get it. But I do think young and wildly.. Merci. Pangie
Date: 1/15/2024 12:41:00 PM
Very innocent and romantic young love. So poetically penned, dear Pangie. xxox
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Date: 1/15/2024 12:46:00 PM
Right on! I recall my forst boyfriend, sitting on a pier in summer..He had green eyes and freckles. Good summary of the poem. Merci.Pangie
Date: 1/14/2024 9:45:00 AM
A sweet romantic poem. Another classic piece written by you for all of us to enjoy.
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Date: 1/14/2024 12:20:00 PM
Thank you Elena for being a constant support! I dont need a stadium of folkwers. I do think ALL Poets need to study any great poet of their choice everyday. How can we improve reading amateurs, no matter how good? I am ging to be reading TS Eliots, The Wasteland. Think of the hundreds I have never read! Merci, Pangie
Date: 1/13/2024 4:53:00 PM
ahhh, young love...you captured it quite well, Pangie. I appreciate your use of 'come hither'...and how to say no...priceless. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 1/13/2024 5:00:00 PM
Great observation , Sara.. about the come hither and how to say no. I didn’t thimk much about it! I appreciate your alert mind and friendship. Its cokder than normal, but not nearly as bad as Iowa! Merci, Pangie
Date: 1/13/2024 1:17:00 PM
A fun/cute young love write/picture. Have a great weekend................
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Date: 1/13/2024 1:40:00 PM
Young love, new love smake life warm amd magical. Lve is lije firefles that gives brightness ti life. Merci,,Panagiota
Date: 1/13/2024 12:21:00 PM
Very lovely romantic! have a great day dear lovely Panagiota ~AA
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Date: 1/13/2024 12:29:00 PM
Hi abdulah, have been wondering how you are! Happy New Year to you and yours! I am so glad you liked this poem. I was hesitating posting it.. I hope to add an image soom. Thank you, Panagiota

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