That First Warm Twinkle

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That very first, velvet, warm meeting with him!, Goosebumps, danced, all over your young skin. His eyes, say “come hither “,with a welcoming twinkle. How to say, “no” to his soft, dazzling dimples? You were his, then, now, and a starlit forevermore! Sealed,like a beautiful butterfly, his surrendering paramour. 1/13/2024

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/15/2024 7:46:00 PM

You sure were/are one precocious Panagiota! ~ Pimples and Zits

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/15/2024 8:45:00 PM

G~ you are a riot!….. I think were/ are are 100% qiute accurate. Although being “The Ancient Mariner,” so to speaki heve no skin problems, in fact, am very old…yet peopleb stop me in the stores and ask me what I use on my face, they tell me. It is young and glowing?i dont get it. But I do think young and wildly.. Merci. Pangie

Regina Elliott

Date: 1/15/2024 12:41:00 PM

Very innocent and romantic young love. So poetically penned, dear Pangie. xxox

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/15/2024 12:46:00 PM

Right on! I recall my forst boyfriend, sitting on a pier in summer..He had green eyes and freckles. Good summary of the poem. Merci.Pangie

Elena Eagle

Date: 1/14/2024 9:45:00 AM

A sweet romantic poem. Another classic piece written by you for all of us to enjoy.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/14/2024 12:20:00 PM

Thank you Elena for being a constant support! I dont need a stadium of folkwers. I do think ALL Poets need to study any great poet of their choice everyday. How can we improve reading amateurs, no matter how good? I am ging to be reading TS Eliots, The Wasteland. Think of the hundreds I have never read! Merci, Pangie

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/13/2024 1:17:00 PM

A fun/cute young love write/picture. Have a great weekend................

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/13/2024 1:40:00 PM

Young love, new love smake life warm amd magical. Lve is lije firefles that gives brightness ti life. Merci,,Panagiota

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 1/13/2024 12:21:00 PM

Very lovely romantic! have a great day dear lovely Panagiota ~AA

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/13/2024 12:29:00 PM

Hi abdulah, have been wondering how you are! Happy New Year to you and yours! I am so glad you liked this poem. I was hesitating posting it.. I hope to add an image soom. Thank you, Panagiota