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That First Naughty Word

Couldn’t say it as a kid because it was a sin - To say that small four letter word - what trouble I got in! A girl who was my babysitter taught the word to me. But then at eight, I learned that word’s effect on family. . . Mischievous and curious were cousin Steve and I; he too had learned that naughty word. It happened by and by (after we’d discussed it some and what the bad word meant) we voiced it ALOUD at a reunion and got sent to another room where we were scolded mightily. And for a long while, that foul word was uttered not by me! Well, you can say that word (these days) -in certain company: like with bikers and delinquents or my son, an ex-Marine! But I don’t like to say the word, except when very mad and in my car in traffic jams: (that’s when I say things bad!) Then nasty words I’ve read or heard from friends or on TV become the very words I hear come pouring out of me. It’s strange how that first naughty word I learned I must not say is now a word that (if I want to) I can say today! Nonetheless, I keep that word under lock and key. I’m glad that we can’t use it here to ruin our poetry! For the "You Can Say it Now" Contest by Paula Swanson

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Date: 4/16/2012 1:54:00 PM
lol, yes, so true. i'm glad i found this one - i'm afraid i'll stumble across your secret poem for pd - will keep mum if i do
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Date: 3/21/2011 7:47:00 AM
You are right I think we say it to ourselves when we get mad we may say it out loud. Good one. love phyl
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Date: 12/29/2010 4:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "You Can Say It Now" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2010 9:11:00 PM
You know all my life up through, especially the three years in service, it was the thing for guys to talk nasty. We practiced it. I did not at home, around girls, any grownups, at church, around my brothers, or any of my friends who professed to not like it. Sometime after I married it just hit me that with all the guarded moments anyway, I could just quit it. I still slip once in a while but really try not to. Good poem.
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Date: 12/21/2010 7:57:00 PM
Congratulations on an awesome win my friend. Two thumbs up. Love Phyl
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Date: 12/21/2010 7:36:00 AM
Congrats Andrea for a magnificent win in Paula's contest with this awesome write ..so well deserved for a brilliant concept my friend.. enjoy another top ten victory so sweet for a sweetie.. with luv..
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Date: 12/21/2010 5:59:00 AM
Smiles, there is a lesson here for all in great light poetry. There is a time and place for certain things in life and if it might cause upset or unsettlement then its probably best not said. I love the rhyme scheme you have going through your verses here too. Well done and congratulations on the win!
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Date: 12/21/2010 12:12:00 AM
Wow, very clever that even with this contest, you did not tell (^_^). Andrea, I enjoyed reading this and congratulations on your well-deserved win. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 12/20/2010 8:53:00 PM
hey Andrea I love this one. many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 12/20/2010 7:34:00 PM
Congratulations Ms. Naughty ;) love Wilma
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Date: 12/20/2010 6:11:00 PM
Congrats my dear..I can say it now...BG
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Date: 12/20/2010 6:09:00 PM
What a cute way to express the theme of this contest!! Clever and witty! Congratulations once again Andrea!! :)
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Date: 12/20/2010 4:17:00 PM
haha, you're babysitter taught you that four letter word eh? well shame on her/him. keep the naughty words in a lock box! lol.i remember on an old movie with that alien ET.i used to repeat every bad word they used in there when i was little. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 12/20/2010 3:21:00 PM
Your another winner.Great I'm just to slow this shopping thang is almost over.Merry Christmas Andrea.Your friend Teresa
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Date: 12/20/2010 3:10:00 PM
I mean this was a fabulous read.Good luck Andrea in the contest.I might do one.Thanks for the congrats on my win.Your friend Teresa
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Date: 12/20/2010 2:18:00 PM
Dare ya to write it dare ya! dare ya! - nice poem Andrea. It's sure to do well in Paula's contest >> James
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Date: 12/19/2010 4:09:00 PM
Good one..I am sure that all can relate to this work..Reads like a winner to me ..Good luck..Do you get the taste of terrible soap when you hear or say that word? If not, you don't know anything about being fussed at or punished..I was delighted that you stopped by, read, and commented on my work..Yes, my father was exactly the middle child..There were eleven and there were five above him and five below him..He lived the longest ..He was 96, 11 months, and two weeks old when he died..Sara
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Date: 12/19/2010 1:48:00 PM
Suspense,suspense all the way but can be easily imagined, Andrea. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/19/2010 12:47:00 PM
Andrea, you thought outside the box as per request.. Brilliant piece and good luck for the contest.. Enjoy the rest of your weekend, love Wilma
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Date: 12/19/2010 11:22:00 AM
Andrea great poem read it with a smile on my face and yes a great entry
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Date: 12/19/2010 10:56:00 AM
Brilliant ..Bravo.. but .. hang around all the testosterone I do and try to keep that word from coming out ..haha.. it is truly a challenge for me but I do it.. and am proud that I don't use it any more.. luv that last line Andrea.. good luck in the contest.. this was really unique and quite different .. u are genius to think of it to enter luv... winner ..winner...
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Date: 12/19/2010 9:44:00 AM
Hmmmm...I am constantly amazed at the way our language as gone to the dark side..so to speak. I heard that the F word is now the most common slang word used today. Good one. BG
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Date: 12/19/2010 9:42:00 AM
yes! so well-expressed, andrea... i cannot help by say " the word" with a great, crisp sense of delight! fantastic wordings! best winning wishes in the constest.. huggs, nette :)
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Date: 12/19/2010 9:02:00 AM
Well done Andrea, I so get this poem... you have hit the mark with this one...Happy Holidays to you luv Michael
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