That Deceiving Voice

I should have resisted that deceiving voice
that entrapped me and made me quickly fall...
when silence dominated to conceal noise;
and however sorry I am, I felt tall. 
Devil, why did you choose someone so meak...
to do horrible deeds unthought by this mind?
Devil, you hide in dense shadows and peak,
hiding in caves more afraid than a child.
As beautiful things so charming and grand...
temptation led all to wrongdoing,
but without real compassion and feeling,
thoughts clustered together to offend.

That deceiving voice kept on coming back...
alienating friends who looked to me for help.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/9/2010 7:44:00 PM
Great to see you here, Andrew, in this winners circle. Hope you are well. Congratulations on your sonnet! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/9/2010 3:02:00 PM
Kool title Andrew to a well written Sonnet, many congratulations on your win in Thvia's contest >> James
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Date: 11/9/2010 10:50:00 AM
Andrew, well written sonnet, your production of "That Deceiving voice!" Congratulations on your poem's honor, Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/9/2010 5:10:00 AM
More congrats Andrew on your HM in the devil made me do it contest luv..enjoy another grand honor all your own today with luv..my friend..
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Date: 11/8/2010 7:21:00 PM
Great writing Andrew. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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