Thar She Blows

Well I wonder if anybody knows
Just what happened to all ten of my toes
With this belly eclipse
From the food on my lips
Counting calories is now how it goes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Cwiak Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 11:10 AM
Gongrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
Freeman Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 5:33 PM
Congratulations Larry, on your win. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 12:42 PM
Congrats Larry on your big win in the Bulge contest with this great write.. enjoy another sweet victory ..with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Johnson Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 10:32 AM
Happens to the best of us, if we don't stop to count. Great job. Congratualtions Love, Joyce
Devonshire Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 9:41 AM
Had a good laugh thinking of the "belly eclipse" that hid your toes, Larry. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 12:57 AM
And I like yours too! good luck in the contest! Luv, andrea
Foster Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 7:24 PM
Many smiles. If you look in the mirror you might find the toes, good one Larry...Margaret
Roberts Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 4:33 PM
that was adorable, love it , good luck
Gorelick Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 12:13 PM
I love this one..damn, I hate being plump...Bg
Taylor Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Terrific, Larry. Good laff. Best of luck.
Green Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 11:23 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Great one, Larry! Good luck in the contest.
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