Thar She Blows

Well I wonder if anybody knows
Just what happened to all ten of my toes
With this belly eclipse
From the food on my lips
Counting calories is now how it goes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/27/2010 11:10:00 AM
Gongrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 5/26/2010 5:33:00 PM
Congratulations Larry, on your win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/26/2010 12:42:00 PM
Congrats Larry on your big win in the Bulge contest with this great write.. enjoy another sweet victory ..with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/26/2010 10:32:00 AM
Happens to the best of us, if we don't stop to count. Great job. Congratualtions Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/26/2010 9:41:00 AM
Had a good laugh thinking of the "belly eclipse" that hid your toes, Larry. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/23/2010 12:57:00 AM
And I like yours too! good luck in the contest! Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/22/2010 7:24:00 PM
Many smiles. If you look in the mirror you might find the toes, good one Larry...Margaret
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Date: 5/22/2010 4:33:00 PM
that was adorable, love it , good luck
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Date: 5/22/2010 12:13:00 PM
I love this one..damn, I hate being plump...Bg
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Date: 5/22/2010 11:52:00 AM
Terrific, Larry. Good laff. Best of luck.
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Date: 5/22/2010 11:23:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Great one, Larry! Good luck in the contest.
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