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Thar She Blows

Well I wonder if anybody knows Just what happened to all ten of my toes With this belly eclipse From the food on my lips Counting calories is now how it goes

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Daniel Cwiak

Date: 5/27/2010 11:10:00 AM

Gongrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

John Freeman

Date: 5/26/2010 5:33:00 PM

Congratulations Larry, on your win. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/26/2010 12:42:00 PM

Congrats Larry on your big win in the Bulge contest with this great write.. enjoy another sweet victory ..with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/26/2010 10:32:00 AM

Happens to the best of us, if we don't stop to count. Great job. Congratualtions Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/26/2010 9:41:00 AM

Had a good laugh thinking of the "belly eclipse" that hid your toes, Larry. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2010 12:57:00 AM

And I like yours too! good luck in the contest! Luv, andrea

Margaret Foster

Date: 5/22/2010 7:24:00 PM

Many smiles. If you look in the mirror you might find the toes, good one Larry...Margaret

Francine Roberts

Date: 5/22/2010 4:33:00 PM

that was adorable, love it , good luck

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/22/2010 12:13:00 PM

I love this one..damn, I hate being plump...Bg

Ralph Taylor

Date: 5/22/2010 11:52:00 AM

Terrific, Larry. Good laff. Best of luck.

Amy Green

Date: 5/22/2010 11:23:00 AM

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Great one, Larry! Good luck in the contest.