Thank You

As you are day I am night As I am night You are day When I was blind you were my sight In the hours of darkness you were my guiding light Like the moon and the stars that shine so bright You navigated me home in the foggiest of nights. The heavens have sent you this I do not doubt As i tally my blessings I take you into count For you were the only one to help me surmount. No longer wanting to live a life of sedation As I walk the road to self revelation I carry a heart full of love, respect and appreciation For the one whom helped me claim my throne of salvation. THANK YOU

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Carol Eastman

Date: 9/14/2013 11:05:00 AM

Bravo! Very inspiring dedication... Welcome to PoetrySoup... I'd love to read more of your work.

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu

Date: 9/3/2013 4:29:00 AM

Awesome piece. Looking forward to reading more from you.

Skat A

Date: 6/19/2013 8:27:00 AM

Hi Beverly, this is a nice thank you poem. , Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/17/2013 1:28:00 PM

Hello Beverly ! - thanks for your first poem, I hope there will be more in the future. - Welcome to P-Soup - Have fun with poetry, share your thoughts and words here with us. - Welcome to read some of my poems. (give comment and get back) - Always nice with several new friends. - Good luck with your writing. - Have a great time here at P-Soup. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/17/2013 1:17:00 PM

This is a very nice thank you note...a beautiful message Beverly, . Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda