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The fair breeze had steadily blown And in the rocky pasture, the lilies danced. The bubbly boys saw us And giggled and shyly had run. The grave cloud floated slowly over And caringly had shaded us. The wild grass grown very high Had us in her lush lap hid. The old tree behind her trunk We had standing become one. The old man who was Godly And thus couldn’t us see. Those seeing birds in gaiety had sung When by the country we walked And secretly kissed, cuddled, and kissed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/11/2014 4:10:00 PM
Very nice imagery fayaz bhat, I especially liked, "old man who was Godly And thus couldn’t us see." Thanks for sharing/Sinclair
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Robert Rogers
Date: 2/12/2014 12:07:00 AM
I agree with you FB, it is only a paradox when there are two known opposing factors, if it is unknown to exist, it is impossible to be a paradoxical element of an opposition. I have to read more of your work tomorrow!...I really like your pen!//Sinclair
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Fayaz Bhat
Date: 2/11/2014 11:59:00 PM
Thankyou dear Robert. Infact my editor had called it a paradox, and my reply was "Eyes cannot see what mind does not know"

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