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please don't text and drive
she replied, "like, whatever"
services at two



Barbara Gorelick
for Judy's contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2015 5:05:00 PM

Nice win...PD

Thomas Martin

Date: 4/17/2015 2:45:00 PM

Great!! ROFL but actually serious concern.

Mohan Chutani

Date: 4/13/2015 10:24:00 AM

part of being in the virtual world, BG. Congrats for fine message. Mohan

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 4/13/2015 6:40:00 PM

Thank you dear, a hard lesson I'm afraid. Barbara

Matthew Anish

Date: 4/12/2015 3:54:00 PM

Do you mean funeral services? If so then you have created a nice horror poem. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 4/13/2015 6:41:00 PM

I do mean funeral services. It happened here and broke my heart. Barbara

Abdul Malik

Date: 4/12/2015 11:44:00 AM

Now, this is really good and topical. Very well said. congrats.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/12/2015 10:50:00 AM

Good one, Barbara! That was a quick text to heaven! Congrats on your win! // paul

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 4/13/2015 6:42:00 PM

Yes, I debated about posting this one..seems so grim, but Im afraid it happens way to often. Barbara Thank you ...

Tammy Reams

Date: 4/12/2015 9:03:00 AM

Love this write Barbara. Now I get it! Services at two....7 from me! Congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2015 10:00:00 PM

Oh Barbara, I did one like this a long time ago Not the same words of course, but that same idea. I really like yours!! Today I did traffic school and all they talked about was wearing seat belts and not texting. Geez, the two things I DON'T do. I don't even know HOW to text, and still I got a damn ticket.

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 4/13/2015 6:44:00 PM

I haven't had a ticket in years...but I got a warning recently. And it was NOt about texting..I get so angry when I see it..and I see it often. thanks for stopping by..Barbara