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There once was a naughty girl from L.A.
On Halloween she put on a display
She got dressed as a cell phone
Her push buttons made men groan
And she led many men far astray.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
November 29, 2010 at 3:59 AM
Congratulations on your win Deborah in Irma's "Halloween Costume Contest". Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 2:53 PM
Congrats Debbie on your big win in Irma's cool contest with this rare beauty entry luv.. enjoy this win with luv..my friend..
Mehta Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 1:33 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Deb
Harper Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 1:26 PM
lol, too funny, congrats on the win!
Fraser Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 9:37 AM
haha, alluring Limerick Deborah. Congrats on your win >> James
Johnson Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 8:21 AM
Congratulations Deborah on your witty limerick and win. Love, Joyce
Mannan Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 3:32 AM
hahah. I sure can imagine. many congratulations for this win.
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November 25, 2010 at 10:13 PM
Debrah,CONGRATULATIONA! and Sorry for judging my contest late. Once again I love the taste of my # 1-10 placements. Enjoyed the thought and smiles. Thanks so much for my contest entry, have your self a wonderful & bessed holiday~luv* SKAT
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October 20, 2010 at 11:45 PM
Hahaha nice one Deborah. I really enjoyed reading it. Best of luck with the contest. Taha
A   Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 5:04 PM
okay got it, D.G., texting is my game., enjoyed, have a good one,...P.D.
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 5:43 PM
heeheeheee!!!
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October 8, 2010 at 8:28 AM
Excellent, beautiful, so funny and amusing showing the crafts and skills of your writing perfections. Great Limerick. I have placed a new poem today & in next, two three days I am introducing a new form of Poetry on PS. Hope you would enlighten me with your valuable comments and suggestions and on its technical part. Love and best wishes always......Ravindra.....Deborah Guzzi
Keys Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 2:04 PM
this one deserves higher than a 7 ... well said: so there is a naughty side to you, great work. thanks, chuck
Brown Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 9:58 AM
Spot on Deborah. I love this one the bestest I have read yet. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 6:25 AM
Cute..Another idea for a scare him to death costume...Would it work? Enjoyed ...Sara
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October 6, 2010 at 6:32 PM
funny one... so naughty!!
Keogh Jr. Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 4:51 PM
Headmistress, you are randy and bawdy, but I like it. It has that blue appeal of a classic limerick. Regards and love from Gerard.
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October 6, 2010 at 3:05 PM
my kinda woman. jhl
Mehta Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 2:37 PM
Oh fantastic entry to the contest with nice imagery, Debbie
Roberts Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 2:00 PM
whoo hoo, naughty, cute limerick Deborah
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October 6, 2010 at 1:41 PM
Funny write!!!! one correction 3rd line "dressed as a" I think you men...best of luck, this is original....always Michael
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