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Texas Syndrome Written In 2009

If you’re looking for a fight, If you feel like running on horseback, To saw bars of prisons, if you want to play poker Or drink a whiskey in a saloon, Perhaps there is a reason? An unhappy childhood, The betrayal of a beautiful ideal or The desire to enjoy life, then Ask yourself the right question, Maybe you had an uncle in Dallas Or have you seen too many westerns, Maybe a woman lied to you? Yet women smell good, So is it Texas syndrome, : "Too many manly guys around you?" PS, this is full of french clichés i guess, when i wrote that in 2009

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Date: 10/29/2023 10:59:00 PM
It's not much like the westerns on T.V. anymore, Yann. I like your poem about Texas though. It's filling up with all the people that hate where they were living. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 10/21/2023 2:58:00 PM
ha. and things are not changing. i hear they want to leave the union.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/22/2023 5:39:00 PM
thanks Andrea, you learn me about Texas, i didn't know, i 'll keep it secret, smiles have a sweet day
Date: 10/21/2023 4:25:00 AM
delightful, Yann. Being from Texas, I was particularly drawn to your words. Your question at the end says it all. Well done, sir! Thanks for sharing your words, Sara
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/22/2023 5:40:00 PM
thanks a lot Sara, for the supportive comment, i only know texas from westerns, it is a very big state have a sweet day
Date: 10/21/2023 2:42:00 AM
You wrote very well even back then.. a sign of a great poet.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/22/2023 5:41:00 PM
Thank you so much SO, this is kind words have a nice day
Date: 10/21/2023 12:50:00 AM
Funny, I wish I could learn more about the cliches xoxo
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/22/2023 5:42:00 PM
thank you Aurore, clichés are the forst step may be, for travelling have a sweet day poet
Date: 10/20/2023 5:56:00 PM
I'd love to see and read the original French yann; but I enjoyed this English rendition. Thanks so much
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/22/2023 5:43:00 PM
thanks a lot Jeff, will post in french again have a nice day

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