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A timeless being possesses its life all at once, completely in atemporal, duration, eternity here and now, without succession. A timeless being is beyond and unswayed by time. In contrast, a living being experiences succession in time, only ever possessing and being conscious of one moment of its life at a time. See https://plato.stanford.edu/entries/eternity/

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Tethered To a Moment

The rain fell hard blinding me
as its drops beat on eyes
open and eyelid shut.
I reached up for another grip,
a slippery handhold on slimy cliff
which was my only way out
of the canyon, with rapid rising surge
dragging at my feet, trying to pull me under.
I dared not blink as I tried the hold and lifted
my body up a notch in cranny crag.
I blinked when it held, I sighed for moment.
I blinked again, and again, in relief.
Then, it was time for another try.
Another reach for another sigh,
each moment tethered 
to succession of blinks of eye
defining time's duration.
Tethered as it is
to moments in
present tense
between blinks
as shutter closures
when we're awake.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Seeker Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 7:21 PM
Wow! What an amazing picture you paint poetically, John! Congrats on your win
Anderson Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 11:17 AM
Thanks and Best Wishes.
Ibeh Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 3:15 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing write, John!:-)
Anderson Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 11:18 AM
Thanks for your comment. Best Wishes
Mcintosh Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 3:29 PM
Wonderful writing. I enjoyed this and hope he makes it - this fellow who is climbing. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
Anderson Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 7:58 PM
Sorry the climb was a dream I had. I made it!
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