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A timeless being possesses its life all at once, completely in atemporal, duration, eternity here and now, without succession. A timeless being is beyond and unswayed by time. In contrast, a living being experiences succession in time, only ever possessing and being conscious of one moment of its life at a time. See https://plato.stanford.edu/entries/eternity/

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The rain fell hard blinding me as its drops beat on eyes open and eyelid shut. I reached up for another grip, a slippery handhold on slimy cliff which was my only way out of the canyon, with rapid rising surge dragging at my feet, trying to pull me under. I dared not blink as I tried the hold and lifted my body up a notch in cranny crag. I blinked when it held, I sighed for moment. I blinked again, and again, in relief. Then, it was time for another try. Another reach for another sigh, each moment tethered to succession of blinks of eye defining time's duration. Tethered as it is to moments in present tense between blinks as shutter closures when we're awake.

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Date: 9/8/2021 7:21:00 PM
Wow! What an amazing picture you paint poetically, John! Congrats on your win
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John Anderson
Date: 9/9/2021 11:17:00 AM
Thanks and Best Wishes.
Date: 9/8/2021 3:15:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing write, John!:-)
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Date: 9/9/2021 11:18:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Best Wishes
Date: 8/28/2021 3:29:00 PM
Wonderful writing. I enjoyed this and hope he makes it - this fellow who is climbing. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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John Anderson
Date: 8/28/2021 7:58:00 PM
Sorry the climb was a dream I had. I made it!

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