Terror

. Fear Cougar Scream At three in morn Wide awake Terror See rattlesnake In garden Contest:Septolet Sponsor:Dr. Ram Thanks for the challenge....

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Richard Moriarty

Date: 8/9/2011 8:44:00 PM

Goodness, Sara, you wondered about whether I was walking down the street of broken dreams, fear and terror described like this would frighten me to death...you got my attention, Richard

Saurabh Gupta

Date: 7/31/2011 1:50:00 PM

nice write sara.....thanks for your kind comments.....

Gary Fields

Date: 7/29/2011 2:00:00 PM

this is a naturally original poem of distention. I don't apreciate cougar's, especially of the female variety that which seek younger men.....that simply terrorizes' me, and rattle snake is just what a cougar is so keep this under your hat.... and let no one else know! I'm going to put you on my favorite poet list! I know that I do have issues with word-spell so haze me. I love your work seriously! your new friend in the pen/G,FIELDS *****Keep the write-up, up!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/20/2011 7:31:00 PM

both I run from quickly Sara.. did u hear about the leopard who mauled 11 people today and they finally had to kill it..how sad ..I luv leopards..

Kash Poet

Date: 7/19/2011 9:10:00 AM

Very nice Sara...enjoyed.Best wishes.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/18/2011 5:20:00 PM

you are on a roll!!

Don Johnson

Date: 7/18/2011 4:49:00 PM

ah yes them old joe blakes, nasty snakes arising to strike your face, do the cougar make, a feed of old rattlin rattlesnake? xo, Don

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/18/2011 2:25:00 PM

ooow scary. they still have my regular account blocked because i have been hacked, so you have to reach me here. john

George Aul

Date: 7/18/2011 11:47:00 AM

Good luck in the contest........George

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2011 11:18:00 AM

An example of a small animal scaring a bigger one possibly to death!! Good luck in the contest, Sara.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/18/2011 10:32:00 AM

this soars, sara... greaaat work with sure winning wishes! :) huggs,nette

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 7/18/2011 6:49:00 AM

TERROR.......SOME ONE HELP...!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/17/2011 6:03:00 PM

Thanks for your entry to my contest, sara

Don Johnson

Date: 7/17/2011 5:06:00 PM

the cat will get the snake you see, and scoff him down take liberty, fear not the poor old rattler. yes it was your verse first hey. xo, Don

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 7/17/2011 1:05:00 PM

I hate snakes, yuck, I feel the fear! Nice wirte. Thanks for your gracious kind comments oon Emotional Overload Sara......you are too sweet......Love....Old Jack

Hemi Lewis

Date: 7/17/2011 1:00:00 PM

very nice capture of your rwa enmtion love to read more of your stuff