Terminal Kiss

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Terminal Kiss All’s well. We must now part. Life’s hell. Ladawn, plane leaves at three. Come on! Enough! We’ve kissed and kissed. Love’s tough. 4/7/2021 #1 Finding Your Musette 2 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May

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Itumeleng Cangua

Date: 4/6/2023 5:45:00 PM

Vivid image to the mind, well done.

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/26/2021 1:04:00 PM

Nicely done, Janis! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/25/2021 12:08:00 PM

Hi Janis, I see we chose the same photo. I liked your take on the photo. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-)Alexis

Joseph May

Date: 4/24/2021 9:00:00 AM

Goodbyes are often sad, Congrats on your win Janis

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/8/2021 7:41:00 AM

Separation can be hard when it's true love, nice poem, Janis:)

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/7/2021 8:33:00 PM

Charming poem, Janis ~