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  Humid April night
 
    Lover, first sight

         Ideal woman shape

           Sheet, coyly drape

         Sheer, fancy gauze

   Yours Truly, cause

  Crazy angel lover

   Shine under cover

     Knows every trick

        Night heat's thick

            Skin's silky touch

              Tempt lusts, dutch

              Spicy candy mouth

           Slide lower, south

        Tepid torso treat

     Savor syrup, sweet

    Fiery urges, fresh

   Love's lucid flesh

  Feels beget sighs

   Zeal's ardor flies

    Even's wheel turns

   Lust's flame burns

  Wine's bloom, blush

 Final ... fever ... crush.




~ 1st Place ~  in the "Fem Bogstaver (Dutch)" Poetry Contest, Rhoda Tripp, Sponsor.

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Date: 5/5/2018 8:32:00 PM
Belated congrats on your well deserved top win, Gregory. Superbly done.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 5/29/2018 5:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line!
Date: 2/24/2018 1:02:00 AM
hi GRB again i have to say that you are a woman of words. i have no words to praise. simply incredible and masterpiece Again it is my fav
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 2/24/2018 1:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Muhammad, I greatly appreciate the kind words! (I am a man, however). :-)
Date: 1/22/2018 6:56:00 PM
Whew!!! Well that warmed the room right quick and in a hurry! Well done and congrats G!!!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 1/22/2018 7:56:00 PM
Thank you very much, Shadow, I so appreciate that, my friend - blessings to you! :-)
Date: 1/20/2018 6:31:00 AM
Gregory, congrats on your well deserved first place. This indeed was a difficult contest and you were up for the challenge. John
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 1/22/2018 7:54:00 PM
That's so kind of you to say, John, and I am very thankful for your kindness and friendship ... blessings, my friend! :-)
Date: 1/15/2018 12:55:00 PM
YOU SO earned this first place, Rhoda did so well in her selections that I know she long and authentically considered. Congratulations and poetry affection ... CayCay
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 1/16/2018 1:35:00 AM
That's sweet of you, CayCay, thank you very much, my friend ... blessings to you! :-) <3
Date: 1/15/2018 5:18:00 AM
Congratulations, Greg on your great win.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 1/16/2018 1:34:00 AM
Very kind, Subimal, thank you so much! :-)
Date: 1/14/2018 10:36:00 PM
Yet another first place win my friend. Totally expected.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 1/16/2018 1:34:00 AM
You are too kind, my friend, I wish I had your positivity - many thanks and blessings to you, Curtis! :-)
Date: 1/14/2018 6:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Gregory . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 1/16/2018 1:32:00 AM
Many kind thanks, Eve, and hugs right back atcha, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 1/14/2018 5:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win Greg:-) hugs jan xx
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 1/16/2018 1:32:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jan - I so appreciate the kind words, friend! :-)
Date: 1/14/2018 3:59:00 PM
Gregory, congratulations on your First Place win for this very difficult five-letter-word poem! You've done an amazing job! Sandra
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 1/16/2018 1:31:00 AM
That's so very sweet of you, Sandra, this was really very tough ... I spent a lot of time on it, (probably five times what I normally spend on a poem, lol), but I think the more we put IN to something, the more we get OUT of it! Very rewarding experience! Blessings, friend! :-) <3
Date: 1/14/2018 3:21:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear. Please soup mail me about your gift card.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 1/15/2018 2:13:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Rhoda, I'm so humbled and honored to be placed so highly on a list with such wonderful writers ... blessings and best wishes to you! :-) <3
Date: 1/14/2018 3:18:00 PM
Back to congratulate you dear poet <3
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 1/15/2018 2:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dear Friend! :-) <3
Date: 12/23/2017 7:09:00 PM
another amazing poem using only five letter words, Gregory. Not too over the top! Just the right amount of heat to paint a flowing sensuous poem! Merry Christmas to you if you are gone till after Xmas!!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 12/27/2017 8:56:00 PM
Merry Christmas, Andrea - not sure why I didn't see this before, (I don't think I get all my notifications), but thank you so much! This was REALLY hard, at least for me, but I think the ones we work at the most are often the most rewarding ... this was a wonderful contest and "word workout", and a lot of fun! Blessings, Dear Poet Friend! :-)
Date: 12/20/2017 4:56:00 PM
This is a difficult challenge and you did it so well.. you wrote a great sensual poem..
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 12/22/2017 12:53:00 PM
Thanks, my friend, this was a really difficult challenge, and very time-consuming, but I had a lot of fun doing it. Blessings, S1! :-)
Date: 12/20/2017 4:20:00 PM
I don't like you any more. Where is the trophy for this contest? We might as well just hand it to you now. Hmmph I thought I'd done a thorough job of it, but this puts my poem content at the children's table. Seriously, I am happy you and your muse created such an image, above and beyond. You can go home now. Show off. Kidding again. All the best ... CayCay
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 12/22/2017 12:52:00 PM
LOL - this made me chuckle, CayCay, you're so funny and sweet ... I must say, though, this was a really tough one, and I spent a lot of time on it. There's often greater reward (internally) the harder things come, but I wasn't sure how this would come across ... but a lot of fun! I'm so happy you liked it, Dear Friend! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 12/20/2017 3:13:00 PM
Whew! I'm fanning, Greg. This is so creative--and hot. Janice
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 12/22/2017 12:47:00 PM
LOL - thank you so much, Janice, that was my hope, to get across some energy and emotion, but wow, so hard to do with just five-letter words. A great challenge but a lot of fun! Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 12/20/2017 2:51:00 PM
Wow. Woh....Va-voom!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 12/22/2017 12:46:00 PM
Thank you, Leanne! :-)
Date: 12/20/2017 11:16:00 AM
love it! This was difficult for me and you wrote with such ease...good luck it will be a winner! :)-luloo
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 12/22/2017 12:43:00 PM
Thank you so very kindly, Luloo - it may SEEM like ease, but this was REALLY a tough challenge, and took me quite a while ... SO much fun, though! Blessings to you, My Friend! :-) <3
Date: 12/20/2017 9:46:00 AM
Sultry sensational penning! Good luck in the contest :) xomo!
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Date: 12/22/2017 12:42:00 PM
Very kind of you, Mo, thanks so very much! <3
Date: 12/20/2017 9:42:00 AM
I am blown away, Greg, that you actually wrote something so long ... and so sensuous and fiery ... with ALL 5 letter words!!!!!!! Just amazing work!!!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 12/22/2017 12:41:00 PM
Oh, that's VERY sweet of you to say so, Judy, you made me smile ... this was REALLY hard and time-consuming, lol, but a great exercise, and a lot of fun! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it ... I wasn't sure how it would come across to others. Kind of the same reason I love Haiku, (though I haven't written any in a while), the challenge of telling a whole story with just seventeen syllables ... this was a similar challenge. Blessings, dear friend! <3 :-)