Tenth Earl of Kildare

The teeth are dry. 
It is Silken Thomas 
muffling for promises 
among the rats in his straw, 
jostling for a hand, 
once wielding but now 
scratching the toes of power. 

The tongue leather bitten, 
studded with the supplication to You. 
A lament of request, 
where a crumpled 
cluster of bones saddens. 
We can’t only touch the fingers, 
it is the dust that we pray to. 
Skellig harbours the aping of Him, 
the attempt to elbow and impress, 
to crack a languid smirk somewhere, somehow. 
Bless us with crusts and drinking water, 
a hard bed and no doubt, 
for these thy gifts. 

Tertullian calm in Tibet, 
Cork bet and the hay saved, 
a good death for the Blackfoot Shamen: 
all the islands of possibility 
chipped in Easter heads. 
There are nebuli in half breaths 
and in the vacant thoughts of man 
we spawn vaticanus, Giza, Picchu. 
A rattle of stones stacked by bones, 
their names will sometime hurt us. 

Poor half naked Thomas, 
breathing on the kindness of strangers, 
with his five uncles shivering 
on the whim of one. 
We are drenched in his fear, 
in his fall, in his beauty cracked to stink, 
in his soiled fashion. 
Our guts rejoice like a pleasure sickness, 
vomiting lechery. 10th Earl of Kildare, 
loved by the wrong ones and too young, 
your prayer is heard, 
though it throbs at your heart like a wound. 
Our school story is brief, 
your prayer echoes still.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 1/26/2020 7:37:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful. So beautifully written. You have very real talent and should pursue this further.
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Date: 12/17/2020 6:13:00 AM
Wendy, Thanks so much for your encouragement. I'm hoping to improve. I probably need to put more of my work up in places like this. Have you got verse that I could read?
Date: 10/22/2019 9:24:00 PM
If your new, welcome. I like this work. Hope you"ll create and share more.
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Date: 12/17/2020 6:14:00 AM
Robert, I am new. Thanks for the positive comment. I have another one up since yesterday, I would love any input. Have you got any poems here?
Date: 10/14/2019 12:01:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup, Peter.
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Date: 12/17/2020 6:15:00 AM
Line, Thank you. Enjoying the experience so far.
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