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Tensile Grace

Upon this monumental door, a sense of gratitude came before my eyes If stabbed by paths of fear and wrath, new trust came pouring down For behind the glittering forest, and a pomegrante stained sky Enhancing was this quiet hour, in dwindling crimson crowned There, in tensile grace, our meeting came a twofold surprise Lightly splashed in backlight, where the tender grass had grown Quietly grazing with grace, at first unaware of eyes This thing of beauty revealed for my gladness alone Suddenly the white tailed doe sensed me watching her She perked up ears, alert to my presence, yet did not flee Dare I even break the silence with a whispered word? Or take a step per chance my foot might rustle twig or leaf? This battle of wills...intense, a fleeting chance in time Making no move...each of us transfixed, unable to breathe Nor break this entrancing spell as her eyes met mine Moments transpired...only sound of scarcely whistling breeze Eyes like windows, of which the glass is tongue She spoke to me, in hypnotic spell, I felt myself release Our spirits crossed against the sky, beneath the copper trees As if laced, were we, where spirits dwell, in universal peace . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . By Carrie Richards, for Kristen Bruni's contest "What Animal Would I Be?"

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Date: 9/23/2010 11:52:00 AM
Carrie, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 9/22/2010 10:55:00 AM
Beautiful piece, Carrie. I took a camping trip with a friend. We traveled far up into Canada. At one campsite we saw a great elk standing in a meadow. My friend walked up, so carefully, and stroked its back. The animal was not frightened. I've never seen a man so excited by a mircacle of nature. Congrats on this fine poiem. Dave
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Date: 9/21/2010 10:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem featured on PS this week, Carrie. Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/21/2010 11:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/21/2010 9:18:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on this gem being featured. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 9/19/2010 11:06:00 PM
lovely poem, congrats on having it featured this week Carrie
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Date: 9/19/2010 8:41:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great piece to share with us all with luv..
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Date: 5/1/2010 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations on first place with this lovely peom and what a wonderful sweet and peaceful guardian spirit to have.. love constance
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Date: 4/30/2010 10:37:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie. such a gentle creature the little doe. beautiful imagery in this work. well done...Margaret
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Date: 4/30/2010 9:38:00 PM
This is so cool Carrie Congrats on your win- at my house by the lake I had 8 deer sleep in their grass beds every night- in the dead of summer they would come up to the porch- 2 or 3 of them- and let me hand feed them lettuce and carrots- awesome animals
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Date: 4/30/2010 7:00:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie, on your first place win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/30/2010 5:20:00 PM
Congrats on your prize of glory for this excellent poem.
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Date: 4/30/2010 3:14:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your 1st place win in the Animal Guardian Spirits contest with this excellent piece ... wonderful win for u to enjoy as u have a happy weekend..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/14/2010 10:25:00 AM
Nice one !
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Date: 4/14/2010 2:28:00 AM
I remember this one from before, Carrie!...Beautiful revised version...and the TITLE? Wow! - Tim
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Date: 4/12/2010 6:09:00 PM
enjoyed today
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Date: 4/12/2010 2:02:00 PM
I have also experienced this same "transfixed" and "hypnotic" moment. Good Luck in the contest! RAY
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Date: 4/12/2010 1:25:00 PM
Hey, you just made me think of MINE with this. Very nice, as USUAL!! LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/12/2010 1:22:00 PM
Interesting and well written quatrain, Carrie, with really nice imagery. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Best wishes, Caroline.
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