Tender Whispers In the Night

Tender whispers adrift in the night
pillow talk, memories, how their love grew
two souls combine to withstand the fight

Dark shadows linger just out of sight
face to face, eye to eye, talking fears through
their tender whispers drift through the night

Angels await to take him to the light
fingers entwined, hearts beating true
two souls combine to withstand the fight

True love undaunted, soaring in flight
together forever, stronger as two
and tender whispers still drift in the night

Realizing dreams may ne’re come to light
forever together, now numbered too few
as two souls combine to withstand the fight

Heart to heart, hand in hand, facing their plight
listening to the wind and talking to the stars
tender whispers drift through the night
as two souls combine to withstand the fight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/24/2015 3:12:00 PM
Trudy, congratulations on your Broken Heart win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/24/2015 1:04:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb winning write Trudy! Heartfelt emotions well penned!
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Date: 9/30/2009 5:11:00 PM
Congratulations Trudy! This is an excellent and heart felt piece. It is a beautiful thing when souls combine to withstand what this world can give. I wish you the best of luck in the finals! Love, Robin
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Date: 9/24/2009 3:50:00 PM
Two wonderful poems making it into the finals! Congratulations, Trudy ! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:33:00 PM
Trudy, Congratulations on getting through the first round of the poetry contest with two of your great poems! Luck and love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:36:00 PM
Trudy, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition >> James,x
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:30:00 AM
Well done, Trudy best wishes in the next rounds.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/23/2009 10:15:00 AM
Thought for sure I had commented on this wonderful poem once before ... it seems so familar ... well anyway Ms. Trudy its a beautiful write and a well-deserved selection to be featured this week at the Soup. Congratulations!!
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Date: 9/23/2009 5:56:00 AM
Beautiful villanelle, dear Trudy. thank you for sharing. Lainie
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Date: 9/23/2009 3:22:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week.
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Date: 9/22/2009 8:03:00 PM
Trudy, congrats on your feature this week...Raul
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Date: 9/22/2009 6:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Trudy - excellent piece >>James
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Date: 9/21/2009 12:23:00 PM
congrats on being a featured artist
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Date: 9/21/2009 8:01:00 AM
Congrats on being featured... great writing..
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Date: 9/21/2009 6:15:00 AM
Congrats on your poetry being featured this week… please keep writing… great you Trudy! Adeleke
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Date: 9/21/2009 3:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Trudy. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/21/2009 12:03:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Trudy.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/15/2009 10:37:00 AM
A powerful description of a love that will never die as "two souls combine to withstand the fight." Brilliant, Trudy! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/7/2009 10:45:00 AM
loved it, absolutely loved this wonderful piece of poetry, fanstically written you pulled the reader in within the first few lines and held the attention throughout, great flow from start to finish
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Date: 2/6/2009 1:51:00 PM
A gentle yet powerful testament to your love. Extremely emotional as it is beautiful. I am counting on you both winning this fight, making the light of your love shine ever brighter. In my heart and my prayers. Love, Shar
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Date: 2/6/2009 11:32:00 AM
Trudy what an amazing piece. I dare admit that I'd be afraid to try this style, but wow, you make it seem possible for me, this is great. Love the flow and the repeated rhyme scheme as it helps to carry the tone and meaning with clarity. Michael
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Date: 2/6/2009 11:29:00 AM
Trudy knowing what trials you and your husband have been facing gives this poem such meaning - I am spellbound by the overwhelming faith this poem has - You two are truly an inspiration - God Bless you both, MJ
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