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Tender Moments

With you I walk in fields of gold by gentle streams my hand you hold your loving voice it fills my ears and melts my heart and soothes my fears I feel your love pour down on me like warm sweet rain and I am free with you I lay beside the sea each taking what we give so free within my heart this sweet love grows to you my love it gently flows

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Laurie Ginn

Date: 2/2/2009 6:10:00 PM

How genlte and loving this is, it could make you melt in the feeling. loveudo,Laurie

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/30/2009 8:46:00 AM

Again, perfect flow and rhyming... it flows like honey! Love and hugs, Keith

Date: 1/29/2009 4:09:00 PM

What an uplifting poem. I like the idea of love gently flowing. Nice use of imagery. Keep on writing. Thank you for your ongoing encouragement. Karen

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 1/29/2009 1:39:00 PM

wowweeeeeeee! this is perfect...it made me smile all the way through...great job!....love***-**Maryam

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/29/2009 12:13:00 PM

sweet and flowing. you know how to make love. john

Brian Strand

Date: 1/29/2009 7:17:00 AM

Robin,Taize is a Christian worship form (originated in Taize ,France)..a short round ,words are from scripture,usually no more than one sentence,(repeated like a modern worhip chorus)with or without music,meditative and often in a subdued or candle-lit atmosphere.Very reflective.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments on my postings

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/29/2009 5:04:00 AM

Robin, the short lines here work wonders. Simply beautiful and so tender sweet. Check your soup mail! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/29/2009 4:37:00 AM

This a very sweet romantic stroll with words that sings so lovely. Enjoyed this piece very much my friend.

Brian Strand

Date: 1/29/2009 12:00:00 AM

Love flows from your pen Robin in this lyrical poem.One for my favourites I think.rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words

Donna Golden

Date: 1/28/2009 6:12:00 PM

Beautiful write, Robin! Soft, and romantic. You set a lovely scene and a tender tone. Well done. Blessings, Donna G.

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/28/2009 5:59:00 PM

A subtle romantic poem Robin, Great words in a romantic flow...Raul

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 1/28/2009 5:55:00 PM

Wow, this was very sweet and expressed so beautifully..I can feel the love pouring out through this piece..Love the title Tender Moments..Love the flow and the rhyme, Nicely done.God Bless*Tyesha