Robin L. Gass Poet Quatrain

Tender Moments

With you I walk
in fields of gold
by gentle streams 
my hand you hold
your loving voice
it fills my ears
and melts my heart
and soothes my fears
I feel your love
pour down on me
like warm sweet rain
and I am free
with you I lay
beside the sea
each taking what
we give so free
within my heart
this sweet love grows
to you my love
it gently flows

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Laurie Ginn February 2, 2009 at 6:10 PM How genlte and loving this is, it could make you melt in the feeling. loveudo,Laurie

Keith Bickerstaffe January 30, 2009 at 8:46 AM Again, perfect flow and rhyming... it flows like honey! Love and hugs, Keith

January 29, 2009 at 4:09 PM What an uplifting poem. I like the idea of love gently flowing. Nice use of imagery. Keep on writing. Thank you for your ongoing encouragement. Karen

Maryam Jameela Haniff January 29, 2009 at 1:39 PM wowweeeeeeee! this is perfect...it made me smile all the way through...great job!....love***-**Maryam

John Loving Iii January 29, 2009 at 12:13 PM sweet and flowing. you know how to make love. john

Brian Strand January 29, 2009 at 7:17 AM Robin,Taize is a Christian worship form (originated in Taize ,France)..a short round ,words are from scripture,usually no more than one sentence,(repeated like a modern worhip chorus)with or without music,meditative and often in a subdued or candle-lit atmosphere.Very reflective.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments on my postings

Sharon Winter January 29, 2009 at 5:04 AM Robin, the short lines here work wonders. Simply beautiful and so tender sweet. Check your soup mail! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins January 29, 2009 at 4:37 AM This a very sweet romantic stroll with words that sings so lovely. Enjoyed this piece very much my friend.

Brian Strand January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM Love flows from your pen Robin in this lyrical poem.One for my favourites I think.rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words

Donna Golden January 28, 2009 at 6:12 PM Beautiful write, Robin! Soft, and romantic. You set a lovely scene and a tender tone. Well done. Blessings, Donna G.

Raul Moreno January 28, 2009 at 5:59 PM A subtle romantic poem Robin, Great words in a romantic flow...Raul

Tyesha Ehigiator January 28, 2009 at 5:55 PM Wow, this was very sweet and expressed so beautifully..I can feel the love pouring out through this piece..Love the title Tender Moments..Love the flow and the rhyme, Nicely done.God Bless*Tyesha