Tender Moments

With you I walk
in fields of gold
by gentle streams 
my hand you hold
your loving voice
it fills my ears
and melts my heart
and soothes my fears
I feel your love
pour down on me
like warm sweet rain
and I am free
with you I lay
beside the sea
each taking what
we give so free
within my heart
this sweet love grows
to you my love
it gently flows

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/2/2009 6:10:00 PM
How genlte and loving this is, it could make you melt in the feeling. loveudo,Laurie
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Date: 1/30/2009 8:46:00 AM
Again, perfect flow and rhyming... it flows like honey! Love and hugs, Keith
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Date: 1/29/2009 4:09:00 PM
What an uplifting poem. I like the idea of love gently flowing. Nice use of imagery. Keep on writing. Thank you for your ongoing encouragement. Karen
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Date: 1/29/2009 1:39:00 PM
wowweeeeeeee! this is perfect...it made me smile all the way through...great job!....love***-**Maryam
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Date: 1/29/2009 12:13:00 PM
sweet and flowing. you know how to make love. john
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Date: 1/29/2009 7:17:00 AM
Robin,Taize is a Christian worship form (originated in Taize ,France)..a short round ,words are from scripture,usually no more than one sentence,(repeated like a modern worhip chorus)with or without music,meditative and often in a subdued or candle-lit atmosphere.Very reflective.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments on my postings
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Date: 1/29/2009 5:04:00 AM
Robin, the short lines here work wonders. Simply beautiful and so tender sweet. Check your soup mail! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/29/2009 4:37:00 AM
This a very sweet romantic stroll with words that sings so lovely. Enjoyed this piece very much my friend.
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Date: 1/29/2009 12:00:00 AM
Love flows from your pen Robin in this lyrical poem.One for my favourites I think.rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words
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Date: 1/28/2009 6:12:00 PM
Beautiful write, Robin! Soft, and romantic. You set a lovely scene and a tender tone. Well done. Blessings, Donna G.
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Date: 1/28/2009 5:59:00 PM
A subtle romantic poem Robin, Great words in a romantic flow...Raul
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Date: 1/28/2009 5:55:00 PM
Wow, this was very sweet and expressed so beautifully..I can feel the love pouring out through this piece..Love the title Tender Moments..Love the flow and the rhyme, Nicely done.God Bless*Tyesha
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