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tender, then, a gentle kiss daubed in boyhood, meek soft, the pair of little bows their press upon my cheek the brush of fond mystique tender, then, the darling girl in pleats and cotton whites smiling as to woo the world and my heart's fancy flights the charm of summer nights tender, then, a budding love a-tumbling, deep, the grass so aching for a moon above and passion's mute impasse one brown-eyed bonny lass tender, then, to bring a wife thru best of times, and bad if only love was guaranteed to hence, from that wee lad tender blossoms I have had … now their petals, wilted, sad. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Completely Your Choice 19, Any Theme, Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Pick A Title, Volume 2 - Rhyme" Poetry Contest, Edward Ibeh, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 10/1/2020 11:53:00 PM
Charming love poetry, Bard. Your cadence always shines and your ability to depict love poetically is unsurpassed. Congrats on your win, brother!
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Date: 10/1/2020 7:33:00 PM
Greg, big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Date: 10/1/2020 4:02:00 PM
So nice to read this mesmerizing beauty of a poem once again, Greg:-) Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/1/2019 12:08:00 PM
So charming and sweet is this tender poem Greg. I love the form you used as your lines in parentheses emphasize its beauty. Congratulations on your deserving win! I am very behind in reading as I have bronchitis and I am finally beginning to feel like reading again. Cheers xxoo : )
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/10/2019 9:42:00 PM
Many kind thank-you's to you, Connie, I am so thankful that you enjoyed this one, and left such a sweet comment! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 3/24/2019 6:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved 2nd place win in my contest, Greg!:-) Love the photo as well...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/10/2019 9:41:00 PM
I am so honored and humbled by my placement, Edward, and pleased that you found it so worthy. Blessings, My Poet Brother! :-)
Date: 3/24/2019 6:47:00 AM
Congrats!! to you too bro...lovely write my friend...love & light...^WW^...{*J*}
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/10/2019 9:40:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Brother - blessings as always to The Winged One! :-)
Date: 3/22/2019 4:46:00 PM
you took the concept way out from its usual fence, greg...admirable work sweetened by gentle metaphors...thank you for pleasantly surprising me again through your latest challenge; i am humbled... huggs
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/10/2019 9:40:00 PM
That's very sweet of you, Nette, thank you very much, Dear Poet! :-) <3
Date: 3/22/2019 2:45:00 PM
Lovely done Greg, an elegant rhyme, my best to you in the contest! xomo <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/10/2019 9:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen! :-) <3

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