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Tender-Foot

What do you do When the sun is over you And icicles drop down On your big toe Would you scream profanities Crazy words would you say Then you might crush those icicles Under you sore feet That’s exactly What you would do You tender-foot Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/8/2011 10:24:00 AM
LOL, I could imagine this : )
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Date: 11/6/2011 10:06:00 PM
never mind our tenderfoot, sounds bit icy on the foot, id sidestep round chook ....:)
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Date: 11/6/2011 4:01:00 PM
Great!
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Date: 11/6/2011 11:46:00 AM
LOL Very witty, Russell. Actually, my doctor told me not to walk around barefoot because I have nerve damage/numbness in my feet and might not feel it if one of those icicles crashed down on it. Of course, there's little chance of that happening in Florida:) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/6/2011 8:21:00 AM
cleverly crafted lines and premise Russell.. can visualize this scenario .. charmingly witty and I think I would stomp on those icicles too.. give me Summer please....
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