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Ten Word Challenge - 2

TEN WORD CHALLENGE -2 – FOR CONTEST – (*Fiction) 1. Ambivalent 2. Arcane 3. Bittersweet 4. Luscious 5. Intercessor 6. Quiescent 7. Flamboyant 8. Immolation 9. Tactile 10. Quintessence I had been *quiescent from dating for quite a while, consumed with my career. He suddenly stepped into my life with his *flamboyant personality. He was the *quintessence of actors on the stage at the theatre. Our connection plunged into the depth of passion with sweet, *luscious, moments after midnight. It was *arcane, risky, spontaneous activity. Then I became *ambivalent. I felt swallowed up by waves of uncertainty. Was this just a momentary rush? Would my heart be ripped out like the act of *immolation? It all seemed *tactile. What about my goals, my thoughts, my work, my life? Then a true friend became my *intercessor showing me this was nothing more than a superficial bond. It is all just a play like the ones he acts out on stage. So, the fun came to an end one *bittersweet rainy night. Heidi Sands *Placed 5th in Contest: Ten word Challenge -2

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Date: 11/27/2016 8:58:00 PM
Heidi, congratulations on your win your poem is great : ) Hugs Eve
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/28/2016 7:44:00 AM
Thank You Eve. I appreciate that! :)
Date: 11/26/2016 12:29:00 AM
Congratulations, on a well-deserved win!Love it! Pandita
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/26/2016 7:37:00 AM
Thank you very much. I am happy to hear that. :)
Date: 11/25/2016 4:41:00 PM
Great narrative. Congratulations.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/25/2016 4:58:00 PM
Thank you very much! :)
Date: 11/7/2016 8:40:00 AM
Great story write using all 10 words Heidi; G/L in the contest!:)
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Date: 11/7/2016 6:44:00 AM
Often it is very sad and heartbreaking when the curtain comes down on a romance. Loved this little story Heidi, though a bit sad, it resonated within me. You used the ten words brilliantly and had me caught up in this wonderful piece. Good luck in the contest.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/7/2016 7:09:00 AM
Thank you, Chris! :)
Date: 11/6/2016 4:07:00 PM
Wow! This is so beautiful and lovely, my friend. Good luck...........A.M.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/6/2016 4:11:00 PM
Thanks so much :)

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