Ten To One

Ten fingers to hold you close Nine live hopefully to share with you Figure eights of love got my head spinning Seven wonders of my world Six feet under without you Five day work week and the weekend I’m with you Four corners of my mind but your in the center Three calls a day just to hear your voice Two eyes to hypnotize me One kiss from you to last forever

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 8/10/2011 6:47:00 AM

nice and romantic Kevin

Kevin Clark
Date: 8/10/2011 8:20:00 AM

thanks Robert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2011 11:41:00 PM

wow, what a CLEVER way with numbers. LOVE this.

Kevin Clark
Date: 8/10/2011 8:21:00 AM

Thanks Andrea

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/9/2011 6:22:00 PM

What a sweeet verse to celebrate that special love in your life. I'm sure she loves you more for writing it. Just so special!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/9/2011 4:57:00 PM

So passionate and romantic..Enjoyed reading..One lucky lady that you have in your view..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Kevin Clark
Date: 8/9/2011 7:34:00 PM

Thank you also for stopping by

Jack Horne

Date: 8/9/2011 3:27:00 PM

Beautiful tender piece

Kevin Clark
Date: 8/9/2011 7:34:00 PM

Thanks Jack for your comments

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/9/2011 3:17:00 PM

a super romantic write Kevin .. luv the notation for each number and how special the meanings aside them luv..

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 8/9/2011 2:41:00 PM

Wonderful romantice write, sounds like a lucky lady has your love and I know you feel lucky to have her.....with love...old Jack....as to the contest I know my poetry is neophyte and I really don't expect to do well, may have offended some by my toung-in-cheek poem, I really hate that..I guess I jest too much sometimes. Thank you for your kind comments on my poem very much appreciated....with love...old Jack

Kevin Clark
Date: 8/9/2011 7:33:00 PM

Thanks Jack

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/9/2011 1:38:00 PM

Felt nice to read Rhyme. Enjoyed it. bl

Kevin Clark
Date: 8/9/2011 2:09:00 PM

Thanks bl for your comment

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/9/2011 7:33:00 AM

Nice expressions on the feelings of love, Kevin