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Ten Lines

Ten short lines: a mite succinct To get a poem writ and inked. It takes a certain type of mind To get one’s thoughts in space confined. For one who likes to write in verse And isn’t used to being terse, Such limits serve to strike a dare – Compose concisely, or despair! Despite some stress, I found relief: For here’s my poem - it’s ten lines brief!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/14/2011 7:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry placing in Brian's "Upto Ten Lines" contest Ilene. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/13/2011 1:43:00 PM
Oh well done...terrific. congrats on your success in the contest. BG
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Date: 10/13/2011 10:43:00 AM
Enjoyed very much ilene!A brilliant write .Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/13/2011 10:30:00 AM
Well done Irene. I enjoyed this entry. Congratulations on your HM in Brian's contest
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Date: 10/12/2011 5:38:00 PM
Cute one..Got a chuckle..Congrats..Sara
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