Tempting Pot of Desire

Red lips, the perfect simmer in her hips, 
A pot of desire seasoned just right,
the malt vinegar to my fish and chips.
I had Coke at home, I wanted a Sprite.

I lifted the lid, stuck one finger in
the sizzling gooey layers steaming
with sticky sin, but what to my chagrin, 
The absent aftertaste had no meaning.

I searched for fullness, but not satisfied
and still feel a rumble deep down below,
I need to eat with my heart—not my eyes,
but temptation’s a sly cook, apropos.

His recipe for lust grew from the root; 
you know, it’s in our blood to eat the fruit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 7:32 PM
AHA, great metaphor you have here, Mike, A really nice poem that I much enjoyed. COngratualtions on this clever piece.Luv, Andrea
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November 9, 2010 at 2:44 PM
Many congratulations Mike on your win in Thvia's contest with this delightful poetry, well deserved >> James :)
Freeman Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 10:17 AM
Catchy last two line, Mike. Congratulations on your win. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 5:01 AM
Super congrats Mike on your winning poem in the devil made me do it contest with this brilliant piece for an entry.. enjoy another top win with lots of luv...
Johnson Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 7:02 PM
Congratulations Mike on your win with this great sonnet. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 11:11 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Mike. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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October 7, 2010 at 6:06 PM
sounds like a real bad day...life changing!~
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October 7, 2010 at 4:00 PM
Don't think so..Interesting thoughts penned..Sara
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