Tempting Fate

I used to walk carefree around this world, 
My shoulders light and free of any chips
Not thinking fate would ever come unfurled
By nonsense escaping naïve lips

I thought Murphy ’s Law was ludacris
Karma for a mind that over thinks
Superstition existed to dismiss
All part of fate’s anxiety hijinks’

Until it came to my moving day
I lived high up on the 11th floor
Casually to the moving guys, “Hey,
Do this quick, I’ll tip you a little more.”

A few shortcuts to speed things up a bit
“What’s the very worst that could happen?
Throw straps on that piano, get on with it,
Hurry up now, I’m too busy to tap in.”

Off I went to an important meeting
Signed the client that made everyone wary
Called 3 times for this face to face greeting 
I wonder why they call her bloody Mary

No bad ever gets to me, nothing could
I stepped on cracks all the way home, too
And I refuse to ever knock on wood
Who could be so down with a sky so blue!

I peered up toward the aforementioned sky
A feeling unfamiliar appeared
A trick of the reflection in my eye?
Or warnings come to fruition I feared

Hurtling down due to a broken pulley
Was my big beautiful baby grand
No one took the time to check it fully
And I stood right where it was to land

I wish now I watched my fate testin’ talk 
Cuz that piano is really hummin’
Whose ivories tickled me into sidewalk
Damn, I guess I shoulda seen it comin’

January 27, 2023
Shoulda Seen it Comin' Contest
Sponsor: John Lawless

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 2/8/2023 10:56:00 AM
Oh, I enjoyed this read Hat. Sorry for the landing though - yikes! Congratulations on your win! :)
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