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Temptation

I see this perfect moon-lit night with million heart-shaped stars in sight ill-clad with none but drooping leaves a fig-tree fraught with a disease its beauty once majestic spoilt in battle lost ‘gainst arid soil Against all odds with all its might a lone fig struggling to the light I near the tree with footsteps sure and marvel at perfection pure a beauty of blue-blooded type abstained for years I match its ripe Then common sense lets turmoil in footsteps once sure now uncertain like Eve had been that first aeon I’m gripped twixt hard rock and a stone: like angels do, with caution tread or foolishly go right ahead? I gaze to heav’n the slightest while a star winks with the merest smile I wink back once, fig’s beauty draws no human born without its flaws entranced, I reach to nature’s art a softness settles in my heart I’m awestruck by my juicy dish on first bite I will make a wish I pare my find with great aplomb perfection glows within its womb I wish upon my luscious feast well soon I too would be deceased The love was pure twixt you and me from knee-high way past puberty your final gift bore on bent knee aware your last meal it would be our fig we shared with great delight first you, then me, alternate bites Heart’s softness hardens, deeply torn a lone tear in each eye is born they multiply, become yet more in memory of our days of yore this perfect fig brought none but pain no fig will pass my lips again ************************************

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/23/2013 5:46:00 AM
Ahhh!! So romantic..Enjoyed reading this one..Sara
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Date: 9/22/2013 7:48:00 PM
Hi Delysia, another nice winning poem...nice Metrical verse win... luv~Linda
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Date: 9/22/2013 12:09:00 AM
Your poem so beautifully written leaves me wondering. Congratulations on your win. Love,Jjoyce
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Date: 9/20/2013 11:59:00 PM
Congrats on winning the place in the contest, delysia
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Date: 9/20/2013 8:44:00 PM
beautiful poem you have created here...congrats on your well deserved win :)
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Date: 9/20/2013 2:53:00 AM
This one is really impressive my friend. What a super start to my morning. This is just the start I need.
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Date: 7/28/2013 6:31:00 AM
WOW Licia, fantastic write, this is something Shelley or Keats would have loved to have said they wrote. It's about time that Attitude was toppled. Your too good to just sit on your ass. Take care, Richard
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Date: 7/7/2013 10:35:00 AM
A great poem of lost emotions, .. ;-) Congratulations-in Nathan's contest!!! awesome winning write. Take Care * Linda
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Date: 7/2/2013 8:28:00 AM
Congratulations on a wonderful entry. I am again impressed with this beautiful poetry.... Love you dearly.... Jake
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Date: 7/2/2013 7:28:00 AM
I will never again eat a fig without thinking of your poem..congrats ..BG
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Date: 7/2/2013 2:16:00 AM
Oh mercy me...What a hauntingly beautiful poem Delysia...I am so familiar with your humor that it is a wonderful shock to see this side of you...Congrats - Tim
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Date: 7/1/2013 9:43:00 PM
D H, a great winning poem, in Nathan's (dark, lost, broken emotions) contest. :-) SKAT
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Date: 7/1/2013 9:21:00 PM
congrats ' NATE
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Date: 6/5/2013 3:25:00 PM
Very powerful, yet poignant writing. Congrats, My friend...Jake
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Date: 6/5/2013 2:05:00 AM
- A winning poem! .... Beautiful! - Deserved really a good place on the winning list! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/4/2013 10:32:00 PM
Delysia, :-) Congratulations with your beautiful poem. many different ways one can express the beauty of life. Thank you for everything. Goodnight * Linda
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Date: 5/21/2013 8:57:00 AM
This is very moving, I hope you overcame the pain and once again ventured to the Majestic tree.
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Date: 5/20/2013 7:49:00 AM
Just browsing through your talented poetry and came across this.. what an expressive and descriptive write. Reminds me of my poem "Good Intentions"
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Date: 9/10/2012 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest of Joyce "My Favorite" Delysia. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2012 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations fantastic win :)
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Date: 9/9/2012 8:22:00 AM
congrats delysia on a tremendous win for this exciting entry so dynamic luv ..
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Date: 9/8/2012 10:05:00 PM
My daughter just returned from South Africa and really loved it there. Congratulations on your win. Well done Lee
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Date: 9/8/2012 7:52:00 PM
Delysia, Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem! Love, Kim
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Date: 9/8/2012 11:48:00 AM
A stunning poem here Delysia.You have maintained a perfect 8 syllables per line throughout the poem.Love this!!!
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Date: 9/8/2012 3:59:00 AM
Congratulations Delysia I envy you your languages skills as well as your writing skills.xx
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