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temptation-

whispers along the wind

seem to tease

curves of truth, nude lips in waiting

you tempt me once again,

with your please

and i am anticipating . . .

whispers along my skin,

not sure why -

your melody leaves me breathless

. . . so tempted to give in

to your sigh,

tracing my love, with one caress

as whispers softly glide,

'pon my lips

and creamy adventures of me,

curves of truth do not hide

an eclipse

. . . the wind tempting a fantasy

_______________

~ To be swept away in the magic of you ~

. . . Because a soft touch can do so much

Temptation

(A Passionate Scribble)  
Form of Poetry-Tri-fall

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Paul Bell

April 12, 2023 at 9:00 AM

Like the casual innuendos running through this, you can add and take away as you please.

Brandy Nicole

April 12, 2023 at 7:45 PM

Thank you for sharing this information, Paul. My heart is smiling with you saying this. :) Hugs, Brandy

Line Gauthier

October 31, 2022 at 7:43 AM

An absolutely beautiful poem, Brandy ~

Brandy Nicole

October 31, 2022 at 4:17 PM

Thank you, Line. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Michael Tor

July 18, 2022 at 5:57 PM

Brandy I share Bills Sentiments in his comments. His words are what I wanted to say. Congratulations in thiscreative write of yours. Your message is so clevely written. Very impressive Brandy. God bless you Dear...

Brandy Nicole

July 18, 2022 at 6:38 PM

Dear Michael, so kind of you to read this little scribble of mine. Awe, how sweet of you to echo Bill's thoughts. Makes my heart smile. You and your kind words are appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy

Bill Baker

June 6, 2022 at 1:53 PM

The lure of a temptation is tantalizing. You've added of the ingredients to bring submission to its grandest expression. Your openness to love and its many expressions allows the poetry to flow smoothly to the audience. Thank you for the pleasure of experiencing your passion through your poetry, Brandy. I'm awestruck and inspired at the same moment. Let it flow freely, resist not the sharing of the words that come to you. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Brandy Nicole

June 7, 2022 at 12:47 PM

Bill, you leave me in complete awe with your beautiful, breathtaking and captivating comment. Being able to share passion in this way, without crossing any lines, is both exciting and challenging- all at the same time. There are moments when the muse and me want to say more. I am able tame that desire within, just on paper. :) Sometimes. Your thoughts bring a smile and make me blush. Thank you for reading this playful scribble of mine. My best to you. :) Brandy

Running Wolves

October 18, 2021 at 3:59 PM

This is truly a breath taking write...

Brandy Nicole

October 18, 2021 at 6:48 PM

A teasing touch creates a breathtaking moment. This scribble is a favorite of mine as well. I can't leave this one out. I appreciate your lovely comment. Thank you, Robert. My best to you. :) Brandy

Brian Strand

September 20, 2021 at 2:00 AM

Very evocative Brandy,not every poet had such an attribute

Brandy Nicole

September 20, 2021 at 4:35 PM

Such a wonderful compliment. Thank you, Brian. This form is one of my favorites. (I should create another poem using this form) I appreciate you and your kind words. :) Brandy

William Darnell Sr

August 30, 2021 at 9:50 PM

Brandy, I love these lines here; they stuck out to me right away. "as whispers softly glide, 'pon my lips and creamy adventures of me." I loved it; again, a skilled quilled penning did you write. Wonderful read! Best of Wishes, William

Brandy Nicole

August 31, 2021 at 5:09 PM

Hi William, thank you so much for your lovely comment and compliment. "creamy adventures" is a very exciting thought. I can understand why you enjoyed this phrase. I appreciate you and your kind words. My best to you. :) Brandy

Gordon Mcconnell

August 25, 2021 at 1:23 PM

such great graphic description Brandy, really suggestive and full of passion too. Take care, Gordon

Brandy Nicole

August 25, 2021 at 7:44 PM

Thank you Gordon, for the wonderful comment and and all your lovely compliments. Yes, there are so many beautiful moments within this playful scribble of mine. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy

Joanna Daniel

August 11, 2021 at 1:56 AM

I love this one, Brandy, in fact, it is going into my faves:) you are an amazing writer, great use of form too:)

Brandy Nicole

August 11, 2021 at 6:21 PM

I am smiling for several reasons. :) Thank you Jo, for placing this in your favorites and for saying I am an amazing writer. Your kind words lift my heart. My best to you. :) Brandy

Rama Balasubramanian

July 20, 2021 at 11:14 AM

This is so breathtakingly beautiful that I am speechless. Your pen weaves magic with words. Reading this gave much joy. Thanks for brightening my Potd with your wonderful comments.

Brandy Nicole

July 20, 2021 at 5:24 PM

I am breathless with you saying that I have left you speechless. Such a wonderful compliment, about my pen being magical. I am just a simple poetess writing from the heart. You are very welcome. Your words are so beautiful and tender. My best to you. :) Brandy

Tobey Hill

July 19, 2021 at 1:47 PM

Beautiful writing ma'am, hope you're doing well. I think you have a title and direction for your next piece (I may run with it). "To be swept away in the magic of you"...enjoy this summer evening!

Brandy Nicole

July 19, 2021 at 8:40 PM

Tobey, a sweet surprise seeing your thoughts here. I am smiling. :) So kind of you to call me *ma'am*. You are such a gentleman. I am doing well, and this is a nice title for a poem. If my muse cannot connect the dots, perhaps yours could. Thank you. It is a beautiful summer evening in which I am currently enjoying. My best to you. :) Brandy

Mystic Rose Rose

July 17, 2021 at 12:18 PM

I so love the poem and the green writing, how did you manage to change to color of the writings, is it easy enough to achieve, ? thanks for the beautiful poem dear Brandy

Brandy Nicole

July 17, 2021 at 7:10 PM

Dear Mystic Rose, your lovely comment is greatly appreciated. A word program helps to make the font different and the color of the words as well. Thank you for reading this little scribble of mine. :) Brandy

Anitha Jayasankar

July 15, 2021 at 10:57 AM

So romantic and passionate scribble dear Brandy... You are a great artist... Thank you so much for your recent visit and comment on my poem... Hugs... ~ Ani

Brandy Nicole

July 15, 2021 at 7:47 PM

Dear Anitha, you and your kind words are greatly appreciated. Thank you for your lovely comment. You are very welcome, my dear friend. You have a wonderful heart. :) Hugs, Brandy

James Marshall Goff

July 15, 2021 at 12:33 AM

Delightful, Brandy

Brandy Nicole

July 15, 2021 at 7:38 PM

Thank you, James. My best to you. :) Brandy

John Watt

July 14, 2021 at 5:43 PM

Brandy, your pastel brush strokes of love's anticipation are soothing and sensual. So many lovely phrases here, 'the wind tempting a fantasy', 'whispers along my skin', 'curves of truth'. You have mastered this art form and it is always a delight to enjoy what you share. Thank you, and God bless you always ~ John

Brandy Nicole

July 15, 2021 at 7:23 PM

John, you humble me with your thoughts. I am not a master at this art form, I am just a simple poetess that writes from the heart. Embracing every moment and emotion. I am in awe that so many phrases captivate you. Thank you, my sweet friend. Your comment brings a smile. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paul Callus

July 11, 2021 at 9:09 AM

Whispers of temptation caress not only the skin, but also fantasy and imagination, Brandy. Anticipation begs for fulfilment! ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Brandy Nicole

July 12, 2021 at 6:47 PM

Of course, and it is breathtaking when imagination meets fantasy. Even more so, when it becomes reality. You and your thoughts are appreciated. Thank you, Paul. :) Hugs, Brandy

Richard Lamoureux

July 10, 2021 at 10:58 AM

Ooh la la, its getting hot in here. Hugs Rick.

Brandy Nicole

July 12, 2021 at 6:45 PM

It is summertime and moments tend to get playful and exciting. Your thoughts bring a smile. Thank you, Rick. :) Hugs, Brandy

Susan Lawrence

July 7, 2021 at 1:39 PM

Brandy, So caught up in the gently tease, the seduction, the temptation. You are an artist with your words. your melody leaves me breathless . . . so tempted to give in to your sigh, hugs, Susan :)

Brandy Nicole

July 8, 2021 at 5:17 PM

Dear Susan, your kind words are greatly appreciated. I am humbled by your compliment. I am just a simple woman that writes from the heart. Emotions of love, a tender touch and sweet sensual moments, caress my mind. Ink from my pen. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

July 4, 2021 at 10:12 AM

It certainly is a passionate scribble and I love your title, she would tempt many an innocent bystander. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole

July 4, 2021 at 9:30 PM

Thank you, Jennifer. You and your kind words are appreciated. The title seemed to fit softly around my words. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Gershon Wolf

July 3, 2021 at 8:10 PM

Yes, indeed. 'A soft touch can do so much.' ... Works in golf and tennis too. ~ Scooby-do

Richard Lamoureux

July 10, 2021 at 11:00 AM

I have a sudden urge to take up tennis again. I wonder if the woman in the photo plays??

Brandy Nicole

July 4, 2021 at 9:22 PM

Thank you, Gershon. Your thoughts about *Golf and Tennis* bring a smile. Wasn't expecting that. :) Brandy

Victor Buhagiar

June 30, 2021 at 10:24 PM

This is so romantic with deep love. There is so much grace in your poetry.

Brandy Nicole

July 1, 2021 at 5:29 PM

Such a sweet thing to say. Thank you, Victor. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Joseph May

June 29, 2021 at 4:56 AM

I love the sensual whispers of love in your poem Brandy, Beautiful write...

Brandy Nicole

June 29, 2021 at 9:40 AM

Thank you, Joseph. Soft whispers create a beautiful mood. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

John Gondolf

June 27, 2021 at 3:48 AM

Your whispers are indeed soft and sensual, Brandy, and create beautiful fantasies in this reader’s mind. Hugs, John

Brandy Nicole

June 27, 2021 at 6:45 PM

Thank you, John. Within those fantasies, anything is possible. Like a dream.. moments softly whisper. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy

Rico Leffanta

June 26, 2021 at 12:21 PM

"Whispers along my skin" certainly describes pheromones windsurfing .... Well done!

Brandy Nicole

June 26, 2021 at 9:33 PM

Thank you, Rico. Those whispers are intoxicating. : ) Brandy

Vijay Pandit

June 26, 2021 at 5:14 AM

An invitation to romance in sensuous whispers--temptation at its best. You are expert, Brandy, in sprinkling tease on anticipation. Irresistible!

Brandy Nicole

June 26, 2021 at 9:08 PM

I am truly humbled by your compliment. Thank you, Vijay. Whispers are both soft and sensual, at the same time. I am in complete awe with your thoughts. :) Brandy

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