Temporary Existential Crisis Aversion Via External Validation
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I don't know whether getting comments on my poems is a healthy pursuit but it's got all the feel goods
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Do I wail into an empty space
Have invisible tears staining my face
Silently scream, never heard
Writing word, after word, after word
Is the attuned ear within me
Myself I need to stop, to see
No outside force to heal my woe
Yes, this I know, I know, I know
But the comforting feel of another soul
Makes me forget myself, forget heavy toll
I'm drawn in, perhaps brought into view
Briefly healed when hear, I want to know you, you, you
Copyright © Di11y Da11y | Year Posted 2023
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