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TEMPORAL 

At rainy Lisdoonvarna your red hair was a flare
which guided us to your side
through multi-sensory squalls
when the crowd’s swell parted our company.

I view this photo, perceive the melancholy,
and see the longing now;
to which those ever sparkling eyes,
and my self-hatred had blinded me.

When they find that quantum is bunkum,
I’ll travel there again and tell you
that i am a fool;
that you are a jewel; then
touch your hand,
and see what flares.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/26/2014 10:35:00 AM
That's a very heartfelt pen here filled of much love longing and hopeful emotions for a beloved. Awesome! A 7 For me! Have s lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Perry McDaid
Date: 11/26/2014 10:56:00 AM
Delighted it found a happy ear. Thank you, Dorian.
Date: 11/25/2014 2:17:00 PM
wonderful feeling of longing and hope - great write with lovely imagery:-) hugs jan xx
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Perry McDaid
Date: 11/26/2014 5:54:00 AM
Thank you, Jan.
Date: 11/25/2014 1:06:00 PM
Great build up... to the end.Welcome to PoetrySoup. Click on an avatar or name to go to anothers poems. Leave a comment and that person will have a permanent link back to your works... Keep writing.
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Perry McDaid
Date: 11/26/2014 5:55:00 AM
Thanks again, Carol. You are a great encouragement.