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Temple of Life

Hymns and bells in the temple marked twilight of my mornings, Effort to conquer beloved through prayers turned futile, I would be in heaven if I rather surrendered to Him ! Written by - Dr. Upma A. Sharma On 7/5/14 For contest- Sijo in a temple Sponsor - Nette onclaud

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Michael Dom
Date: 5/14/2014 7:18:00 AM
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I like the turn in this sijo. Well done and congratulations.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/14/2014 2:53:00 AM
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CONGRATULATIONS on the awesome win.. :) first line. i feel the welcoming.. :) , GBU from olive :)
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Jake Ponce
Date: 5/13/2014 7:15:00 PM
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Congrats, too, Dr. upma. This is really good!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/13/2014 7:13:00 PM
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I am glad it got on ythe list / It seems like it is still sijo but you divided up your lines. Congratulations. It's very nice.
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Date: 5/13/2014 1:29:00 PM
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DR UMPA , Congratulations, in NETTE's, "SIJO IN A TEMPLE " awesome contest. <3 Love * LINDA
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 5/13/2014 1:05:00 PM
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letting go maybe but one which cries out to be heard. dr.,upma... wonderful devotional!.. sweet cheers on your fascinating win in my contest.. huggs
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 5/12/2014 9:09:00 PM
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Impressive imagery..Congratulations on the win, Dr.Upma
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/13/2014 6:00:00 AM
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Thanks Dr. Ram ! U have always been an inspiration !
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/12/2014 3:29:00 PM
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...and back again Dr....congratulations!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/13/2014 5:59:00 AM
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as happy as ever i meant,,
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/13/2014 5:58:00 AM
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And as happy ever to have your wishes Paul //upma//
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Lisa Lee
Date: 5/12/2014 2:24:00 PM
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Oh, Dr. Upma! You're so good at writing! I love it! Congratulations on your win!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/13/2014 5:57:00 AM
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Thanks for the like n encouraging comments Lisa !
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/8/2014 11:44:00 AM
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Very lovely, impressive sijo. gl in contest. [so...are you going to surrender?:)] // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/8/2014 12:39:00 PM
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glad you appreciate wit...appreciate your answer :)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/8/2014 11:55:00 AM
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Thanks Paul ! Appreciate wit ,,, yes I wud surrender but not to Him ,, rather to him ! Will surely love burning in hell !
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 5/8/2014 2:24:00 AM
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Enjoyed the spirituality, Dr.Upma
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/8/2014 11:04:00 AM
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Thanks Dr. Ram ! Glad u liked !
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/7/2014 8:14:00 PM
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Beautifully arranged. Love the spiritual feel and visuals :)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/8/2014 11:03:00 AM
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Thanks Karen for lovely comments !
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/7/2014 4:02:00 PM
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very interesting one, I am enjoying seeing what people do with this theme, though I still can't think up a thing!!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/8/2014 11:03:00 AM
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Thanks be to God ,, it did come out lil well,,, was really tough Andrea! Maybe u r able to write it quick n surely far more better !
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/7/2014 2:31:00 PM
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Awesome write!!! ..I love the way you interpret the theme for a temple of life, Dr. Upma..this si superb!!! ..I wish you luck in the contest!! ^__^
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/8/2014 11:00:00 AM
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Thanks Aiyah ! Did u really like ,,, oh thanks again !

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