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Poetry Contest: Tempest, Sponsor: Robert James Liguori

Tempest of Ice

Ice, what do I imagine.
So far away, I’m floating.
At a distance, I see
the problem, but can’t
make it out. Will my lights
go out; will I freeze?

Blanketed by ice, arctic
circulation - thank the Lord
I have another body
to keep me warm.

Ice falling from frigid sky;
the tempest of crystals.
Will I survive this attack
to the South as the North
L   A   U   G   H   S!

Stuck in ice, on  T   O  P
of a hill, with curvy driveway.
New car underneath cover.

Here comes the ice, the bite
from a monster storm -
the North laughs with
twinkling eyes. The shelves
are empty in the stores.

But see me, cousin, with
icy brows, frozen fingertips,
no lights, no television.

I’m floating on the sea;
can’t make out what
will become of me. Woe
is me. I’ve eaten chicken
fingers in frozen form.
I’m an animal. Electricity.

This tempest hasn’t even warmed,
but the warning from my dreams
is on fire; glacier imaginations
inside my head - icicles form.

Survival of the fittest Southerner;
a crack of thunder, ice, ice wonder.
Floating, at a distance, cousin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dutta Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 7:32 AM
I stay in Kolkata, West Bengal, India, so ignorant of snow or ice. Bengalis travel to Kashmir to get idea of snow. Wishing best for the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 10:57 AM
It is an experience! Thank you, Anisha :)
Hind Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 3:15 PM
Wow. Love this. "North laughing" <3 hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 5:27 PM
Truly, I have family up North! Hugs
Etgen-Baker Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 2:00 PM
folks here in Texas see snow and ice as the worst kind of Tempest.....most of them were maniacs in the stores yesterday. thought this was a delightful read
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 5:27 PM
So glad you re delighted! Makes me smile!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 10:57 AM
What a great read. A fun/cute picture. Stay warm as you go writing away.............
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 12:50 PM
Thank you, Paula! Hugs
Jones Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 7:45 AM
I’m in the south of Carolina and I too dread the ice. Good job writing about it! Best wishes in the contest
Jones Avatar
January 28, 2026 at 1:30 AM
Wow if your husband is in the military thanks for his service and your support of!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 8:00 AM
At least my husband’s home for this storm. Twice, he was overseas. I had to fend for myself, but in the end you figure it out. Hugs. Stay warm and safe!
Proxenos Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 6:56 AM
I can understand if the local stores shelves are empty - i would be helping them empty their shelves if i was stuck high on a hill with a curvy drive way and a monster storm looming. love and hugs Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 7:58 AM
xxoo …Truly, I’m not freaking out. We will survive. Hugs
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